Oh, yay, they got to their first kiss! And what an interesting conversation that led up to it, but not as interesting as the one after. LOL Love all the facts Pro One can just come out with, like Alona is a lesbian because of her heart rate around other women.
Chad’s deductions are all very interesting, especially about the shootings. Although, I agree more with an assessment Jared made earlier. People don’t always react well to things they don’t understand. Jensen’s emotional reaction after his private conversation with Pro One makes me think you have a lot of surprises in store for us yet.
Oh, wow, how very sad. Pro One is only going to last a few more days. Of course, I can’t blame Jensen for what he did. He’s a scientist; he believed in his creation, was anxious to give it that final test. Unfortunately, he couldn’t fathom Pro One developing into what he is now, learning so quickly, making friends, having fun, seeing the beauty in things.
Yep. This is my cliffie chapter. I hope that the slow leak of information, leading to the reveal about how long Pro-One has was handled well. That was a deft part to handle. Too much, too soon and I'd give away the plot. But too slow and I'd lose readers. Anyway, it was challenging. Which is always good.
damn your cliffhangers woman! It is impossible not to keep reading!
Pro-One’s head tilted slightly in that way that meant he was processing. “I think I can tell you why,” he said after a minute. “It is because Doctor Ackles is too good.”
*sniffles* this is going to make me cry, isn't it?
Dr Ackles is a homosexual....oh, I busted out laughing at that...J2 bonding before their make out session was revealing and beautiful. *whimper* He's only got 6 days, he's going to actually die, I know he's AI but damn you woman!!! *wail* Misha Fucking Collins! kdjflkfjaolk
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Chad’s deductions are all very interesting, especially about the shootings. Although, I agree more with an assessment Jared made earlier. People don’t always react well to things they don’t understand. Jensen’s emotional reaction after his private conversation with Pro One makes me think you have a lot of surprises in store for us yet.
Oh, wow, how very sad. Pro One is only going to last a few more days. Of course, I can’t blame Jensen for what he did. He’s a scientist; he believed in his creation, was anxious to give it that final test. Unfortunately, he couldn’t fathom Pro One developing into what he is now, learning so quickly, making friends, having fun, seeing the beauty in things.
And eep! Misha has a gun! Uh oh.
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Pro-One’s head tilted slightly in that way that meant he was processing. “I think I can tell you why,” he said after a minute. “It is because Doctor Ackles is too good.”
*sniffles* this is going to make me cry, isn't it?
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*whimper* He's only got 6 days, he's going to actually die, I know he's AI but damn you woman!!! *wail* Misha Fucking Collins! kdjflkfjaolk
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Thanks so much for these chapter comments. They are wonderful for me!
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