Comments | sandymg: Beach Verse Masterpost -- past indifferent seagulls, J2 AU, 1/1, [PG-13]

sandymg

Beach Verse Masterpost -- past indifferent seagulls, J2 AU, 1/1, [PG-13]

Nov 17, 2010 21:37

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jensen/jared, jared padalecki, j2, rps, jensen ackles, romance, angst, au, comment fic, beach verse, past indifferent seagulls, author: sandymg

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corbyinoz November 18 2010, 03:21:53 UTC

Gorgeous. Gorgeous, gorgeous stuff. So short, and yet it actually brought tears to my eyes. I am more affected by writing that is restrained, that doesn't go for the overblown look, and this was perfect. Thank you for such a moving story.

Corby

sandymg November 18 2010, 03:30:35 UTC

Thanks Corby! I just finished a long one (48K) so I really needed to keep this short ;) I'm really glad you thought it worked.

borgmama1of5 November 18 2010, 03:29:55 UTC

This. Is. Exquisite.

sandymg November 18 2010, 03:30:52 UTC

Thanks hon! You made it better. As always.

debbiel66 November 18 2010, 03:35:34 UTC

Really lovely. The twenty years line made me all teary - so hopeful.

sandymg November 18 2010, 03:38:03 UTC

Thanks so much! I can't seem to write truly sad stories.

asher_k November 18 2010, 03:40:28 UTC

This is so touching, so melancholy and so sweet, I just... I can't explain. It really got to me. Amazing work, amazing writing.

sandymg November 18 2010, 03:46:32 UTC

Thanks. I was trying to combine kinda sad and kinda not. Glad you liked it.

jesseofthenorth November 18 2010, 04:11:27 UTC

Nicely done!
Lotsa sharp edges on this puppy! You packed a lot into 3300 words.

sandymg November 18 2010, 04:12:33 UTC

Thanks! Short is always a challenge for me. I appreciate the compliment.