Okay first, let me just say hooray that Jensen isn’t wearing the hood up while he’s indoors! Secondly, the whole first paragraph is just filled with good! Third… Butch and Sundance! I love that you carry things throughout the story with just a word or two. Okay, done squeeing for the moment.
It shouldn’t be unexpected that Jared thinks he’ll lose Jensen once Jensen is Jensen Ackles once more, but I was still a little surprised about seeing Jared thinking of that. Jensen’s belief that he isn’t good enough for Jared has been a constant, so it’s difficult for me to think that Jensen would ever leave Jared for some other reason. But it is only natural that Jared would have some doubts, and not to be unkind to Sandy, but Jared’s been told before that he could be doing something better with his life. Boy, we really are complex human beings, aren’t we?
“What if after … when he’s back to his old life he forgets about all this? I mean, why’d he want to remember being homeless and desperate? Why’d he want to remember … “ Me
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Oh, Misha, I knew I loved you. You’re like Jared’s Jiminy Cricket.
Damn ... I wish I'd put this line in the story! :)
Your comments are candy to me. Seriously. You 'get' all of it. I'm delighted every time you mention I almost kinda surprised you. Only I feel like you see these characters so well it will be difficult. The next chapter -- 13 -- was hard for me. I always have trouble with that chapter. Odd coincidence. Also, you might want to be able to read 14 as well. Just sayin'.
OH there's something in Seth that I don't like completely, of course I'm more posessive about Jensen than anyJared in any story or anybody else could ever be LOL (insane-becky- like laughter)
You are picking up on Jared's possessiveness as it's his POV. Perhaps your views about Seth will mellow as you read on. Thanks so much for reading and commenting like this. I hope so you much you enjoy the story's conclusion.
Perhaps... but then... I'm always possesive with anything related to jensen and Dean Winchester, or Alec from Dark Angel or... *insert jensen's character name here* I'm just weird... I'm enjoying this story very very much, wishI had more time to read thou
Hmmm, an artist huh? Jensen is so lost right now, it's sad. The entire Star Wars bit was awesome. “The little trashcan save them.” LOL Ode to Kripke- Jared snorted. “Nah. I like to think I’m a scoundrel like Han Solo.”
Jensen’s eyes met his again, twinkling impossibly green in the flashes of the light sabers. “More like Chewbacca.”
Thanks, I'm a Star Wars geek, so yeah. I should go to bed. But I'm curious to see what you think of the conclusion :) Thanks so much for reading and commenting like this. It really does make me happy.
Love your faith in the characters. Hope you enjoy the story's conclusion!
If you like my writing I also invite you to check out my published novels on Amazon under the pen name Sandine Tomas. Just plug the name Sandine Tomas in the search bar on Amazon.com :)
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It shouldn’t be unexpected that Jared thinks he’ll lose Jensen once Jensen is Jensen Ackles once more, but I was still a little surprised about seeing Jared thinking of that. Jensen’s belief that he isn’t good enough for Jared has been a constant, so it’s difficult for me to think that Jensen would ever leave Jared for some other reason. But it is only natural that Jared would have some doubts, and not to be unkind to Sandy, but Jared’s been told before that he could be doing something better with his life. Boy, we really are complex human beings, aren’t we?
“What if after … when he’s back to his old life he forgets about all this? I mean, why’d he want to remember being homeless and desperate? Why’d he want to remember … “ Me ( ... )
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Damn ... I wish I'd put this line in the story! :)
Your comments are candy to me. Seriously. You 'get' all of it. I'm delighted every time you mention I almost kinda surprised you. Only I feel like you see these characters so well it will be difficult. The next chapter -- 13 -- was hard for me. I always have trouble with that chapter. Odd coincidence. Also, you might want to be able to read 14 as well. Just sayin'.
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I'm enjoying this story very very much, wishI had more time to read thou
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The entire Star Wars bit was awesome.
“The little trashcan save them.” LOL
Ode to Kripke-
Jared snorted. “Nah. I like to think I’m a scoundrel like Han Solo.”
Jensen’s eyes met his again, twinkling impossibly green in the flashes of the light sabers. “More like Chewbacca.”
I'll be finishing this tonight, so happy:)
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If you like my writing I also invite you to check out my published novels on Amazon under the pen name Sandine Tomas. Just plug the name Sandine Tomas in the search bar on Amazon.com :)
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