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embroiderama May 17 2010, 01:59:07 UTC
Oh man, this is so intense and so TENSE and awesome.

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sandymg May 17 2010, 02:00:14 UTC
Thanks! And thanks for the great h/c meme!!

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2sexyboys May 17 2010, 02:37:59 UTC
Wonderful idea for a prompt and great reply to it. The tension was wonderfully angsty and the love *sigh*

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sandymg May 17 2010, 03:04:46 UTC
Thanks. I went full-on love story with this one. I'm glad you thought it worked.

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fanofsuper May 17 2010, 03:47:39 UTC
That was great. I love seeing the boys taking such good care of each other no matter what. It always bring them closer.

I hope you write more because that would be 1 great make out session!

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sandymg May 17 2010, 03:51:50 UTC
Thanks much. I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't intending more as this was a one-off prompt ficlet. But I'll think about and see if the muse strikes again with this scenario.

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fanofsuper May 17 2010, 16:41:27 UTC
You're welcome. Maybe is better than never so I'll take that

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jane_eyre May 17 2010, 06:43:19 UTC
I love what you did with this prompt! It was so suspenseful, and yet you gave them a happy ending. However, I have to agree with heather03nmg I would love to see a second part if the muse allows it.

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sandymg May 17 2010, 13:08:50 UTC
Thanks. I'm amazed at the number of requests for more. I will definitely think about it. Because the sequel to this couldn't really be another ficlet -- I have trouble with short pieces as is :) Perhaps for an rps big bang challenge I signed up for :)

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dreamers_dh May 17 2010, 06:53:54 UTC
I love this!

(and I would love to read a little sequel because saying "I love you" when you think you are dying or your love is dying is easy but living with the words... not so... )

Thank you for writing this!

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sandymg May 17 2010, 13:11:47 UTC
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this. I'm giving a sequel definite thought.

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