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saiika_von_maou August 14 2008, 06:07:54 UTC
So, um...d'you mind if I flail over this like an idiot? I LOVE IT. I would most certainly love to see a scene with Gwen and Ben in the diner!!

God, the emotion...especially in the way you ended it...oh, GOD, all of them eating in silence...my heart wilted and swelled with happiness at the same time. LOVE.

BTW, I'm not sure how to do a tab in html, but what I do is add an extra space between paragraphs. It's a little easier.

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sandwich14 August 14 2008, 19:45:53 UTC
Thank you! ^///^ I shall get to work on that scene with Ben and Gwen ASAP!

My heart wilted and swelled as I wrote it. T_T I felt great that Gwen gave the green light for Kevin to go out with Ben, but I still feel bad for her. D: I'm glad I got the emotion right. I was worried I made it all cheesy... >.>

And I spaced out the paragraphs. Now it's a bit less of an eyesore, lol. XD

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saiika_von_maou August 15 2008, 01:15:22 UTC
Lol. You're welcome.

I totally understand feeling bad for Gwen, cuz I adore her. But...I just don't like her enough to give her Kevin. ^^;

Can't wait for that new scene! *squeals*

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sandwich14 August 15 2008, 04:09:00 UTC
Well, I like both pairings, so I don't really mind who Kevin ends up with. XD;;; but for the sake of this fic, he ends up with Ben. >3

I'll be sure to post the diner scene as soon as its finished!

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blackmystique August 14 2008, 16:12:25 UTC
To indent you use: < P> No space of course.
And yay, Kevin likes Ben. I feel bad for Gwen though. And I would love to see a diner scene.

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sandwich14 August 14 2008, 19:47:05 UTC
Thanks! ^^ I felt bad for Gwen too when I wrote it...but I've already begun to work on the diner scene! :D

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makotohayama August 14 2008, 17:39:58 UTC
Awwwww~~ you totally must do a sequel, with Ben and Gwen in the diner!! D: I really feel bad about Gwen, but life is harsh =A=

Hope to see more one-shot from you! <3

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sandwich14 August 14 2008, 19:49:21 UTC
Thanks!!! :3 I've already begun to write out the diner scene! :D Yeah, life is harsh. Poor Gwen, not getting the man she wants. X3

I'm in the process of writing even more one-shots, although most of them are for my other fandoms, like Naruto.

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makotohayama August 14 2008, 21:42:15 UTC
Welcome!! ^^ I will wait for it then!!

Ohh... 83 good luck with all the proyects you have o3ob

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sandwich14 August 14 2008, 21:50:40 UTC
I don't have too many one-shots...I've got a KakuHida, SasoDei and KisaIta one-shot in the works (so three right there), as well as the diner scene. I also have that three-part BeVin one-shot, but I don't like it all that much. I think I might just scrap it.

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Being A friend akatsuki_hime1 November 30 2009, 17:38:24 UTC
Can I be ur friend pls??...
Thank you!
I hope I'm not wasting ur tym..

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Re: Being A friend sandwich14 November 30 2009, 19:29:35 UTC
Sure you can friend me. ^^

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