Blink, Chapter 4: Behind closed doors

Nov 11, 2010 01:16

Damon pulled on the door knob in defiance, finding his strength to be no match to the magic even as he tried to force it open. He poured out his frustration, anger and everything else he could muster into forcing the knob to turn but it refused to budge.

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outch! damon_s_86 November 10 2010, 17:48:20 UTC
This chapter was painful to read. specially the last few paragraphs.
I'm hooked. Please spare him. Where at least in fanfiction we get to see him reunited with his beloved.

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jadedrose01 November 11 2010, 04:16:44 UTC
I am so speechless right now. I'm feeling a million things at once after reading this.

I swear, I have had the worse day today and I thought this evening was going to be even worse, but then I get online and there it is! The next chapter of "Blink" and I can't even begin to describe how relieved and excited I was to start reading. I'm still relieved, but I'm also heartbroken and more in love with Damon and Elena than I ever was before.

I swear, reading those last few paragraphs, I felt like it was last Thursday all over again. I hurt for them and it's almost physically painful just thinking about it. That should tell you just how amazing your writing is.

OH! And on a different note, I am so impressed at how well you write Katherine. It's like I told you after the last chapter, you have the character's "voices" down perfect and Katherine is no exception.

And I'll just shut up now. Sometimes I get excited and talk too much, but thank you for sharing such awesome writing. I can't wait to see what brilliance you come up with next.

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bleu_marine_2 November 11 2010, 05:54:53 UTC
I was going to review, but you said everything I was going to say, so... Ditto! :-D

I'll particularly stress how physically painful it is to think of last Thursday's scene, and the subsequent videos/fics around it that mimic the tragedy angle of the storytelling. I still feel the pain at times, even after a week, and I did in places in this chapter. I guess it's a testament to how powerful the original and subsequent scenes are. It's like having a broken heart by proxy. Damn you and your phenomenal acting skills, Ian! :-) (not really... :-D ) Looking forward to the next chapter.

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sandrine_c November 12 2010, 19:01:16 UTC
agree that it's physically painful to remember that. i must have watched that scene more than 10 times!

Anyway thanks for the review. hope you keep reading (just posted the next one) :)

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sandrine_c November 12 2010, 19:00:09 UTC
posted the latest one :) hope you like it and thanks for the review...very nice motivation to keep going hehe.

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lollipopshoe November 11 2010, 22:04:04 UTC
I love the plot and the way the story is going on. Although, I'm really thirsty for more Delena moments. *-*

Anyway, nice work, I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

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damon_s_86 November 12 2010, 15:43:01 UTC
Honey, do you realize how close you are to the plot of the show? you must've seen the episode!!!

I told you, you should send your stuff for them to read!!!

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sandrine_c November 12 2010, 19:02:09 UTC
hahahaha got lucky i think :D now if i can just get lucky some more so we'll see more d/e on the show...hehehe

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damon_s_86 November 12 2010, 19:56:11 UTC
I'm praying for the same. (Sacrifice 210) seems promising. Damon is all over the place.

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