Fic: Sweetness (1/1)

[sandia_spring]

 
Title: Sweetness
Author: sandia_spring
Pairings/Characters: Clark/Bruce
Genres: PWP, Fluff
Rating: R
Warnings: soft-core M/M sex
Spoilers: None
Summary: Clark seduces Bruce with fruit.
Date Of Completion: May 6, 2008
Date Of Posting: May 7, 2008
Disclaimer: I don’t own them, DC does; but if I did own them, we'd never leave the house.
Word Count: 1240
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[jij]

*groans at the final line* Oh man! This was hot. You painted this picture so vividly, it was absolutely mouth-watering.

He bit. Velvet and wet, like his lover’s mouth.

Oh good grief, that's sensual. The whole piece is just amazingly sensuous, in its exploration of the power of taste and scent and texture to awaken us to the ecstasy of the moment.

Like Adam, he had taken fruit from his lover, and like Adam, he was suddenly aware of his nakedness, under his armor, inside his own skin...

Fantastic. What a sentence, meshing up physical and emotional nakedness and revealing how they're always there under the armor...

I'm really just delirious over this fic. You've made my night.

[jij]

*scampers in* Hi Sandia! You only have to friends-lock the post to worlds_finest, not this one on your LJ--if you lock this one as well, only people you've friended can read it. :( Which would be a crime! *puppy dog eyes*

[sandia_spring]

I fixed it! (I think) I got confused on what I was supposed to lock, but I think it's fixed now. Thank you for your wonderful comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I just got the urge to write something with peaches and Bruce and Clark one night and somehow this came out. :)

[bradygirl_12]

Mmm, peaches! ;)

The sensuality of this piece is outstanding. I agree with Jen's comments up above.

And this:

Not for the first time, a small part of him was amazed that he could play with Kryptonian fire, make love to this man of unimaginable power, and come away unscathed.

Outstanding line! It sums up part of the powerful attraction of one Clark aka Superman. :)

[sandia_spring]

Thanks for the compliments! *blushes* I'm glad you liked this. It's only a small payback for the hours of enjoyment I've had reading "Rainbow's Freedom." You and Jen are my favorite WF writers, so it's high praise coming from both of you! BTW--the "Kryptonian fire" line, along with the "Adam" line, were the most fun to write.

[bradygirl_12]

Thanks for the compliments! *blushes* I'm glad you liked this.

You're very welcome! :)

It's only a small payback for the hours of enjoyment I've had reading "Rainbow's Freedom." You and Jen are my favorite WF writers, so it's high praise coming from both of you!

Wow, I'm in good company! :)

BTW--the "Kryptonian fire" line, along with the "Adam" line, were the most fun to write.

Yes, the Adam/fruit reference was perfect! ;)

[min_taiwan]

The fiction is so HOT and interesting. I really love your example that mention Eden. It's very sexy. :-)

Thanks for your wonderful story!

[sandia_spring]

Thanks, Min. I'm glad you liked it--and that you liked the Eden reference. I had fun writing that. I look forward to seeing more of your art!

[stinglikeabee]

Seduction by fruit; I feel this should be part of a book of Clark's guaranteed-to-work techniques :D Fantastic!

[sandia_spring]

Glad you liked it! Like I said to Jen, I just got this idea one night for something with peaches and Bruce and Clark, and this is what I came up with. I was originally trying to work it into a longer story but it just made more sense as a short scene. Thanks for the feedback!

[laramoon]

oh man... that was niiiiice! :) *thumbs up*

[sandia_spring]

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! (And I'm also glad i FINALLY got the durn thing unlocked!)

[laramoon]

(And I'm also glad i FINALLY got the durn thing unlocked!)

;) And so are we. hehehe!