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sandia_spring

Clark in Love (1/1)

Jul 13, 2007 18:16

Title: Clark in Love
Author: sandia_spring
Pairings/Characters: Clark/Bruce, Lois
Genres: Fluff, Very Mild Angst
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: Clark's in Love.
Date Of Completion: July 13, 2007
Date Of Posting: July 13, 2007
Disclaimer: I don’t own them, DC does; but if I did own them, we'd never leave the house.
Word Count: 1020

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slash, fanfic, superman/batman

Comments 24

wachey July 14 2007, 01:08:52 UTC

Awww!! Omg!! It's Bruce Lois, not a girl!

This fic was so sweet!! The image of Clark blushing as he talked on the phone is just too cute!

sandia_spring July 14 2007, 01:19:44 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! I have an idea for a follow-up where Lois finds out who Clark's "girlfriend" really is. I've started writing part of it but I wanted to see how this story went over before I finished anything yet. Thanks so much for reading!

bitbitbot July 14 2007, 22:17:36 UTC

write it! this was adorable! i love the outsider perspective that lois gives.

aravistarkheena July 14 2007, 01:32:45 UTC

Aw, this was great. Clark was adorable! I love the way you use Lois as the person Clark chooses to go to for advice.

Thanks so much for sharing!

sandia_spring July 14 2007, 01:42:43 UTC

Thanks! I just had this idea (a "plot bunny" I think it's called) where I wondered what Lois' POV would be, so I took that and ran with it.

supercaptain182 July 14 2007, 01:39:29 UTC

Lois is going to be in for a surprise then. This was very sweet!

bradygirl_12 July 14 2007, 01:53:08 UTC

Wow, this is great, Sandia! Your description of Clark when he gets back from Gotham is wonderful (goofy, corn-fed grin!)! And Spiffany's? LOL!

I love Lois in this story. She is exactly how I like her: Clark's friend and parter-at-the-Planet instead of a romantic interest.

I hope you write that sequel! :)

sandia_spring July 14 2007, 02:01:19 UTC

I like this Lois too--kind of like Clark's best friend, in a non-romantic sense. I'll try to explore more of her in the future.

tmelange July 14 2007, 02:05:21 UTC

You have a wonderful Lois voice! This story was fabulous. Clark was just too goofy and adorable in love. And I particularly loved the idea of Bruce calling him incessantly, and sending him gifts to the office. LOL Bravo! What a wonderful first fic. I look forward to seeing more of your work. :))

sandia_spring July 14 2007, 02:25:53 UTC

Thanks so much! *blushes* I have a lot of fic ideas I hope to commit to paper (er...screen?) over the next few months. I look forward to reading your work, too. There's so much in this group to read it's overwhelming!