[FIC] Law and Order: Metropolis, PG, Part One of Three

Aug 09, 2010 00:53

Law and Order: Metropolis

In the criminal justice system, The People are represented by two separate yet equally important groups: the police, who investigate crime, and the district attorneys, who prosecute the offenders. These are their stories.

Part One )

[series:lom], .fic., [comm:smallvillebb], fandom:smallville

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marikology August 17 2010, 07:42:06 UTC
I kinda love this story. At first I was like, "SV/L&O whaaa?" but I am hooked. The imagery is great without being too florid or overbearing and I love your dialogue. But the best part is you have the characters in completely different situations as from the show, but the characterization is spot-on. I even like Jimmy here, and that's an accomplishment. And Davis Bloome as a coroner? Well played, madam. Can't wait to read the rest.

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sanadafaye August 19 2010, 02:43:08 UTC
Wow, thank you for the wonderful words! Don't worry, I had a similar "what you talkin 'bout, brain?" moment before I started writing it.

With this being a fusion fic, characterization was the most important thing to me (it wouldn't have worked so well if the characters were only recognizable by name), so I'm glad you could still see them in there.

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