BSG Noir Part Nine

[samstareagle]

The haunting echoes of better days float through the open windows of my apartment from across the street. Air conditioner conked out two weeks ago, building super’s too cheap to fix the system in the building. Not like I’m complaining…wide open windows and a cool evening breeze is all I need anyway. Plus, there’s just nothing like sitting back,

Comments

[cherylad]

Your descriptions are amazing, Sam, and very much flow with this style of writing.....

More? Soon?

It's heating up Sam!!

[squirrely4u]

Whooooo Hooooo that was just starting to get hot....it's heating up!! More please!! :lol:

[dedonna]

Sammy...you paint a picture with words. If I didn't know you were an artist, I would totally guess it. And you surely know how to build up an-ti-ci-pa-tion. I can't wait to see how you wax poetic on luuuuuuuuurve scenes. ;)

[mlsky]

I LOVE the way you set a scene...the style, the tone, everything. Just needed to say that before I run off to read the next chapter. :)