Fic!

[samslave]

Title: Un-named right now
Pairing: Pinto (AKA Chris Pine/Zachary Quinto)
Rating: pg-13...for now
Summary: Zachary falls in love with Vampire Chris.
Other: I want to thank all the awsome ladies of Pinto Chat!

Part 1

Comments

[samslave]

Thanks *blush* part 2 is up now :)

[vapid_wastrel]

YAHHHHH!!!! YOU POSTED IT!!!!

I am so proud of you bb

love it!

(you may want to adjust the formatting. it makes me hard to read when its like this)

[samslave]

Aw thanks bb.
Fixed the format. Hope that's better :)

[foom101]

OMG! This is awesome! Update soon!! :D

[samslave]

Updated last night. Part 2 is now up :D

[foom101]

Thank you for notifying me! :D

[garden_hoe21]

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[garden_hoe21]

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