Triage (6/12, PG13, Dean, Sam, John)

Jun 08, 2010 21:41

Title: Triage
Disclaimer: I own neither Supernatural nor its characters.
Rating: PG13 so far. Might be R later, but I doubt it.
Pairings: None.
Characters: Dean, Sam, John, Pastor Jim, OCs.
Wordcount: 3800.
Warning: Grammar (unbetaed!). I'm really really sorry about the tenses, guys...
Spoilers: None.

Summary: Sometimes you think you made the right ( Read more... )

john, dean, sn story, fic, triage, my fic

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pinkphoenix1985 June 12 2010, 20:00:54 UTC
you just ripped my heart out and stomped on it *sniff* I absolutely loved the flashback

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sams1ra June 13 2010, 04:35:05 UTC
*hands you a kleenex*
Thank you!
I kinda miss the Picture Perfect 'verse. The flashback was supposed to be about the day Dean was born, but I just missed writing wee!Dean ;)

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pinkphoenix1985 June 13 2010, 06:52:51 UTC
I do so miss the 'verse as well! it was one of the first pre-series that I read

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mtee June 13 2010, 16:49:39 UTC
Wow that was heart wrenching! Great chapter

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sams1ra June 14 2010, 14:38:23 UTC
Thank you!

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just_ruth June 15 2010, 23:15:02 UTC
I started this when I got home from work and read it all in a gulp.

This is fabulous and heart-breaking. John reads true like the fumbling, flawed person that loves his sons so much. Having sat vigil at hospitals, I know how kind and consciencious the staff can be. Valerie is a great outsider point of view.

That young couple - my heart aches as I wonder what their story could be.

I'm hooked.

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sams1ra June 16 2010, 03:59:35 UTC
Thank you!
I'm really glad people seem to not hate John. Writing a John cenetered fic is not the easiest thing 0_o
Thanks for reading!

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