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there is a darkness (11/?)

Jul 26, 2012 12:39

there is a darkness
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Pairing: Bonnie/Klaus, Tyler, Stefan, Damon, one sided Bonnie/Jeremy, Caroline/Matt, Elena/Stefan, Damon, Elijah
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: spoilers for the finale, blood, some gore, sexual situations
Summary: It's a power thing, Bonnie realizes. And that changes everything.

( She has a lot of people watching over her, Bonnie realizes. It’s not like before. )

series: there is a darkness, character: bonnie bennett, character: tyler lockwood, character: stefan salvatore, rating: nc-17, character: klaus, fandom: the vampire diaries, pairing: bonnie/tyler, pairing: bonnie/damon, pairing: bonnie/stefan, character: caroline forbes, character: damon salvatore

Comments 11

consumedly July 28 2012, 10:02:19 UTC

I've no idea how to comment on this one... I love this fiction so much and there are moments when I want to write smth deep and meaningful and yet all i get is fuck! what! son of a b! sweet! it''s about time! is she serious! and now (clearly) is one of those times and I...

love it so f! much! thank you for writing it!

kanjo_girl August 2 2012, 23:40:29 UTC

lol, I know the feeling! Sometimes I have a hard time analyzing some stories and all that comes out is, "THIS IS SO WONDERFUL OMG WRITE MORE I MEAN PLEASE OMG" lol

Thank you so much! The next update is up ^^

twinsters08 July 28 2012, 20:45:03 UTC

Great chapter!!! The only problem is they just keep you wanting more!! Can't wait to read the update, and I think it's sweet that Rebekah seems to be watching over her rather than watching her. Wish the religious part could have been left out, though I know that it's logical for dark Bonnie to not believe in God. I just wish it didn't have to be stated in the story :/ just had to voice that thought. Thanks soooo much for this chapter and cannot wait for the update!!!

kanjo_girl August 2 2012, 23:45:11 UTC

I'm sorry about the praying part. If it triggered you, I can stop mentioning it. I just have this head canon that Grams taught her all about the spirits when they were little that 'they are always listening' and so Bonnie would pray to them, hoping they would listen.

I love Rebekah and I think Bonnie and her would be wonderful friends if not for Klaus and Elena, tbh. lol

Thank you! Next update is up!

sana4eva July 29 2012, 23:42:33 UTC

The very first paragraph, bb, had me dang near sobbing.. so beautiful and haunting, and guh.. a ball of melting ache. Rebecca/Bon was brilliant in understanding, and lovedLOVED the Stefan caught with her in a towel.- USTbaby! Bamondreams=win. You make me joyful every.single.time. Bless your heart sweet Kanjo_girl. *runs to read again*

kanjo_girl August 2 2012, 23:47:20 UTC

Oh no, don't cry!

LOL total UST. Stefan and Bonnie to get it worked out but of course this is my fic and I like to draw things out waaaaaaaaaaay too much, lol.

Thank you so much! You flatter me. .:hugs:.

beautifulcurare August 2 2012, 19:39:08 UTC

My goodness...I can relate to Bonnie and her father...that change in their relationship...huge case of the sads...thanks for that, lol...I feel bad for Klaus...he seems so...drained? Lack of ambition does not look good on him. I don't want him to go on a killing spree for world domination or anything, but for him to have no drive? That makes me sad...

I'm curious about Rebekah and her intentions...she seems like she doesn't want to do any of this and like she wants to be something like friends with Bonnie...I don't know...I'd love to know what's going on in her head, lol...

*sigh* Stefan and Bonnie....oh, what to do with those two? They keep ignoring what's apparent to everyone on the outside looking in...

This chapter has my in my feelings too much...I can't even articulate, lol...

kanjo_girl August 2 2012, 23:50:20 UTC

Oh no, I'm sorry about the first part. I have to keep up the Bonnie moments with her father in the fic for later. And, omg, I know. I sorta feel bad for Klaus but then I think about what a dick he's been in the show and I don't. lol

Rebekah's a strange case. She's loved her brother and followed him for so long but now he's completely at the mercy of someone else: Bonnie and that sorta intrigues her. So she wants to see how this plays out.

Thank you so much! The next update is up~

razycrandomgirl October 1 2012, 04:24:24 UTC

another good chapter. You make me want to read Stefan's Journal. Also I wanted Bonnie to go with Tyler but her choice seemed more right. I liked what Stefan said when it was too like for Bonnie to go to Tyler. sneaky bastard.

kanjo_girl November 12 2012, 18:03:20 UTC

Same. I'll have Bonnie go with Tyler at some point though.

razycrandomgirl November 12 2012, 18:20:52 UTC

ugh I mean Too Late*. My awesome spelling skills