Gift for stellamb! An apple for a Kiss, for spn_j2_xmas

[sammycolt24]

Done for:spn_j2_xmas

Title: An Apple for a Kiss
Gifter: sammycolt24
Pairing/Characters: Sam/Dean Winchester
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: some swearing, bruises, and kissing, Sam is 16
Word Count: 1900 + art
Prompt: I went with your likes: teen!Sam, hurt!Sam/Dean, smooching, and some scarring, and put them into one prompt: Dean nursing Sam after a hunt and first kiss. I

Comments

[firesign10]

Lovely vignette, and lovely art too!

[sammycolt24]

Thank you. I had fun doing it :) I'm glad you could stop by and read it.

[stellamb]

Oh. My. God.
I'm just completely blown away.
How you managed to combine so many prompts and ... To be honest, I didn't expect more than one picture, not to speak about the fic and I'm just completely surprised.
It doesn't matter if you don't think you are a great writer but I you should just continue writing, I really enjoyed it and you characterized Dean just perfectly accurate.
And I really love your style, that crosshatching seems so effortless and light
(I know that's not an easy thing to make drawings so light). That pic of hurt!Dean is my favorite, I'd say, but the other two are really cute too.
I don't have consistent internet at the moment, only for short periods of tine every few days, but -if you want- I could give you bit of critique on the drawings. I don't really know how to critique writing and I'm not a writer so I'm sorry I can't help with that.
Anyway, I really enjoyed everything! Thanks so much, I hope you have a great short rest of your Christmas time and a happy new year!

[sammycolt24]

Phew! I'm glad you liked it. It's kinda funny how this story evolved. I had this completely different idea, then I found the pose for Sam sitting on the window and it just took off from there. I mean, apples didn't show up until I was writing the story. But I liked how it turned out

[obsidianromance]

Your writing was great! I thought it was very sweet. I particularly liked the wording of this part: "Dean knows an invitation when he sees one. He walks over and parks his bottom on the other side of the ledge."
I just liked your characterization of these versions of the boys.

Thanks for sharing! And the art was sweet. Gotta love banged up and bruised Winchesters.

And I love Sam/Jared's little mole. I love it. I love it in the art you did for me and I love it in this. So cute! I just wanna kiss it!

Also - I was laughing at "Also, there’s a chainsaw involved." Well, now you convinced me. I'll go read it!

XOXO!!!!

[sammycolt24]

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked the characterization of the boys. I wanted it to be light and airy, getting the good out of a bad situation. Plus Dean's making Sam's injuries worse than they really are, so Sam's trying to lighten the mood for Dean. And that saying, 'park your bottom' I actually use at school, and I just always liked that, it's funny.

And yes, Jared/Sam needs his mole, he ain't Sam without it :)

YES! CHAINSAWS! I watch this show in hopes that Dean or Sam will find a chainsaw to cut off a monster's head, it's like every horror show's thing. I mean they've used knives, machetes, and Dean even used a saw once, but no chainsaws. So I was happy to see that when I read the book :) Anyways, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again for your wonderful support. Have a great rest of the break.

[verucasalt123]

where the apples lay in the bowl on the table for everyone to see

I don't know if this is supposed to be a Wincest metaphor or not, but it totally is.

[sammycolt24]

Ha ha. I didn't even notice that. I just meant for that to be literal. Like Dean kept passing the apples and didn't realize they were there. That's all I meant for it to be. But if you want it to mean more, then I approve.
Thanks for stopping by and reading it :)

[thestarkat]

Very nice. It was a great story with wonderful moments, combined with gorgeous art. I love the kiss especially, but all the art is lovely. <3