Fanfic--Music Meme Challenge 2/10-12

[sammistarr]

Title:  Losing Control
Pairing:  Gov. Swann/Mrs. Swann
Rating:  PG-13
Summary:  "She had always been been a quiet soul, with soft smiles and demure whispers.  She willingly went wherever she was led and seemed, at least to Weatherby, to be content." 
Disclaimer:  Characters belong to the Mouse!

Note:  For the Music Meme Fanfic Challenge posted here.

Comments

[sammistarr]

Thank you for your wonderful comment and for reading!

[kseenaa]

OMG.... That is so, so sad... *sigh* But oh so beautifully written. Well done. Very well done.

[sammistarr]

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked, even if it was a tearjerker *g*

[mary684]

Oh the litle slipper. I was really doing fine until I read that part -- that was unbearably sad. Poor Weatherby and poor Eliza. It makes so much sense that Weatherby would not acknowledge the change coming over his wife, he has that way about him, of looking only at the good and not seeing all of reality. And he is just the sort of man who would embrace the newborn and be filled with love for her.

Nice details in this -- hurting herself with the shards from the vases she's breaking, the needle attack, the private physician. It would be quite a scandal, wouldn't it?

Such a heartbreaking decision you've left to Weatherby and yet, I'm glad he doesn't come off as a villian for making the choice he makes. Very understandable.

You need to write one now with Elizabeth slowly cracking from the strain of losing Will. Madness can be genetic, right?

Nice job on this one.

[sammistarr]

I'm so glad you liked, but I'm sorry I got you with the slipper *g* I thought it would be a good use of the prompt, no?

I'm really glad it worked for you. And, yes, they say madness can be hereditary, so who knows what will happen to our little Elizabeth?

Thanks for reading and your wonderful comment!