The Killer's Nightmare - Chapter 3

Jan 21, 2008 23:22

Jaejoong/Yunho, Yoochun/Junsu
The ultimate killer he is, but what is it that haunts him so?

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heartoffire03 January 21 2008, 15:57:02 UTC
OMG!!! YOU UPDATED!!!! SPOT!! BRB!!

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heartoffire03 January 21 2008, 16:01:11 UTC
COOKING LESSONSS?!?!?

OMG. BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
i wasn't expection that...
pardon for the outburst *bows*

OMG. that was amazing.
the events just smoothly transition to each other
BRAVOO~!! BRAVOO~!!!

tee hee ^^
i shall be waiting for the next chapter! :)))

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feyla January 21 2008, 16:10:13 UTC
cook lessons. He wanted cooking lessons.

when I clicked on the link I was hoping it was this fic, but I wasn't quite sure. I really do like it since everyone's strong in it (hope my meaning is clear on that). Jaejoong is especially fun to read. I'll be looking forward to what happens next and seeing the interaction again between Jaeho. i really do love fics like this where they can be back and forth with each other like this and JaeJoong actually has an attitude that isn't simpering.

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feyla January 23 2008, 10:36:48 UTC
feyla January 23 2008, 22:39:55 UTC
it's me? have we talked before? *blushes* I can't really remember.

There's another fic that's dealing with being sort of underground assasins, but that one's all one-shots as far as I know. I have no idea what the title of it is. I really like both yours and that one though.

and yeah, I mean their personalities are strong. It's so hard to explain exactly what I meant besides saying that, since I'm not saying the characterization is strong (not that it isn't either) just that they are. Jaejoong and Yunho both know what they want and neither one of them is backing down. It's fun to see them like that because it makes interaction between them so much better, and it's just more true. Jaejoong's being rather snarky and that just always makes me laugh.

I'm glad that my comments help in some way! :P

~and your icon is &hearts

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feyla January 24 2008, 16:59:34 UTC

baegopa January 21 2008, 16:21:46 UTC
YAY! And today I was hinking about your story! It was very enjoyable! Yunho learning cooking (=w=)~! A great update, it was so worth the wait!

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h0tkisses January 21 2008, 16:30:56 UTC
hahaha...yunho's funny...
he only want a cooking lesson..
lolz...can't wait for ur update^^

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parafernalista January 21 2008, 16:56:08 UTC
I love this. Cooking lessons???! What's he thinking? hahaha

Thank you for the update, I was beginning to miss this fic already^^

Looking forward to the next chap

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