Fic:: A Little Less Sixteen Candles (Glee - PG-13 - 1/1)

Jun 18, 2009 03:24

Title: A Little Less Sixteen Candles ( Read more... )

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bklyangel June 18 2009, 12:18:00 UTC
Puck could be trained. Directed. Useful. In so many ways. Rachel waited before meeting Mr. Schuester’s expectant eyes, using her moment to consider the key element she’d been missing in the plan. Because what was high school without a little scandal? Say, a good guy doing right by stealing his best friend’s girl?

And with that thought, Rachel met her director’s look, raised her eyebrows and said, “He’ll do.”

So leaves me wanting more!!!

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running_farmer June 19 2009, 05:44:17 UTC
same! i need a chapter two. i think you've captured rachel's voice really well.

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samirant June 23 2009, 06:09:55 UTC
Well, now I feel like I'm just being mean. Thank for you saying you liked Rachel's voice - I was afraid she'd come off too vindictive, but to me she's just a teenage girl going about the wrong way of trying to get what she wants.

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samirant June 23 2009, 06:08:28 UTC
:D Sorry for the tease, but I wouldn't really know where to go from here without making the whole thing a big old mess. I'm glad you liked it that much, though!

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h311ybean June 19 2009, 06:15:44 UTC
Great job! You wrote Rachel very well. I love having Quinn and Puck try out for the club - I wouldn't be surprised if one or both of them did wind up joining. I loved all the teen movie references, too!

Except...it's Anthony Michael Hall, not Michael Anthony Hall.[/tiny nitpick]

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samirant June 23 2009, 06:10:42 UTC
Hmm, I should fix that and apologize to Mr Hall. Thanks for pointing that out and also for reviewing!

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gingerberrycat June 23 2009, 10:54:46 UTC
NNOOOO!!!!
Sorry for that, but i've quickly become a MUCK fan.
So, the idea of Puck with anyone but Mercedes doesn't work for me.
I mean, Rachel seems like she'd just bitch at him, Kurt would be a wittier bitch, but Mercedes would just beat him into submission. I find that prospect so much more appealing.
On the whole though, great fic.

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