Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 15)

[samberrie]

Title: Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 15)

Author: samberrie (itsa me)

Pairing: All John/Paul

Rating: Strong NC-17, I warn thee.

Warnings: Naughty language, crude humor, general male/male sex, angst

Time Frame: Second American Tour, 1965.

Summary: In this chapter, Paul lets John in? Fail for copying my other summary, haha.

Disclaimer!: I own no Beatles. None of

Comments

[onlywithbuttons]

First...?

[onlywithbuttons]

YUP. Now time to read. >:3

[onlywithbuttons]

Sorry about that. Got a little too excited there. XD

BUT! Another magnificent chapter! Loved it~ You write passion so amazingly!

This line, though, threw me into a fit of laughter: Paul’s heart thumped madly, waiting for him to say something schmoopy, but instead the rhythm guitarist pulled back started walking him backwards towards the bed - finally.

Now I have to find a way to fit 'schmoopy' into a conversation, 'cus that word is just awesome. XD

You never fail to amaze me! Can't wait for the next chapter~! :)

[samberrie]

Yay! I'm not longer a virgin when it comes to comments! Thanks to you C:

Microsoft word tried to tell me that schmoopy wasn't a word. .

I was like BITCH, it is now.

I'm so happy you liked it! Once again, your art inspired me for this chapter. I decided to do something with Paul being all fickle and in denial, like the picture, and I guess it worked out well! Glad you enjoy that burst of passion I threw into this chapter. I was worried it wasn't passionate in the least because of all the jokes and metaphors I wrote along with it, but you have reassured me haha. :3

[spitrainbows]

Yowzuhs!
Hrmph. That was hot. Like, well... yowzuhs. Just have to say you are a pro at describing hot blowjobs. Woof.
Paul in denial is delicious too. Something about their suffering is quite nice. Probably something unhealthy on my part but it does make it all the more exciting. Must be the feminist side of me.
Also:
What kind of belt gets stuck at a time like this? A miserable belt whose aging wife, she used to be a trendy belt that all the teenage girls would go wild for back in her golden years, had just left him for a sexier, younger belt with golden buckle that’s what kind.
Be my bride?
This is dead good, basically. But you know that!

[samberrie]

Thanks! I was kind of intimated at first to write a blowjob since I could never have received one being a female, and I've also have never given one, lol. But I thought I did pretty darn good anyways, so I'm glad you found it hot!
If it's unhealthy on your part, then it must be terminal to me since I wrote it haha! I love a masochistic Paul in denial as well, there'll be some more of that on the way.

I gladly accept your marriage proposal, but it'll have to be a pretty low-key ceremony since I'm under the legal age. C; We'll be cowboys, on the run from the law on our horsies and whipping out our huge pistols whenever we can. It will be glorious!

Oh my, thank you so much for the nice comment. Tickles my teeth, it does.

[spitrainbows]

More torture? You're spoiling us!
Swing on over to England then... the legal age for marriage is 16, and you don't even need to ask your parents, unless you're a square. We could still do the cowboy bit though, I like the sound of that.
Thank goodness, I was aiming for teeth-tickling.

One thing though, not entirely related - I am a HUGE fan of how fast you update, especially considering most of the other longer stories take weeks to update and it takes you out of the moment. Yer a gen-u-ine hero!

[samberrie]

Eh, still one year off D: I'm just a wee fifteen year old who can't even get married in England yet. How sad! Well, get out yer boots an' spurs...

Yeah, it's pretty fucking great innit? I know.
I hate waiting, and I'm paranoid people will stop reading if I take too long [that's what I do to other authors... *guilty*] which is why I try and go so fast! Just my paranoia kicking in, as always.

[samberrie]

I'm so happy you think they stayed in character! Win for me!

That really annoys me when authors do that, make them totally irrational and OOC just to make the smut work. Smut can still work with the boys in character, people! Stop being lazy, I say!

The ending even makes me sad. Paul is such a bitch in my fic, lmao. Poor John, why did I do that to him? ...Because I enjoy fictional/real character's pain that's why, muahahahaha...

I'll try and update as soon as I can! Thanks for leaving a comment, as always :D

[miss_lizzy777]

Everything about this was perfect. It was funny, it was INCREDIBLY hot, and it was sad at the end. Also, the part where today was the first-and-a-half best day ever =D

AND! Were George and Ringo applauding their fucking? That would be perfect payback for George, wouldn't it ;-P

Paul is still a little bitch. You know you love him, Paul! You wasted a lot of time denying that you wanted to fuck him, don't make the same mistake denying that you love him. Silly boy <3

Anyway, lovely chapter! I'm sorry you have to go back to school, partly out of actual sympathy (high school does suck; so glad to finally be out of it), but mostly for the selfish reason that I'll probably have to wait longer for more of your delightful fluff/filth/hilarity.

[samberrie]

LOL, yes, I implied that those two were cheering them on afterwards XD Perfect payback, indeed!

It's official, Paul is the biggest little (oxymoron) bitch in the... Bible? Sure.

Yay! Glad you liked this chapter! And yes, I'm replying to this before schools starts, because I'm psychotic.. it sucks D: But I will survive another year in that dreaded place!

[windywisp]

omg
i finally decided to start reading this after being such a lazy fuck, and I'm glad I did! I love this fic~
and i love this chapter dgdhjhg <3 It was really hot and passionate and lovely and funny and dgfdgfdf
the last line omg screaming
can't wait for more! :'D

[samberrie]

Hee hee, I do that sometimes. Especially when the author updates as quick as me (which is pretty much no one... C;) But I'm glad you decided to start reading again!! <3

Thanks for commenting nice things! So happy you liked this chapter! Next chapter probably wont take TOO long, but ya never know...