Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 13)

[samberrie]

 Title: Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 13)
Author: samberrie (itsa me)
Pairing: John/Paul and George/Ringo
Rating: PG-13? Maybe R.
Warnings: Naughty language, crude humor, implied male/male sex
Time Frame: Second American Tour, 1965.
Summary: In this chapter, it’s the start of the boy’s free day.
Disclaimer!: I own no Beatles. None of their songs and none of

Comments

[miss_lizzy777]

Yay, my whip-cracking paid off! This was awesome. I love your characterization of everyone here. George's obsessive guitar-playing and John's depression and Ringo's overthinking are all spot-on. Also, Paul is such a little bitch XD

More, please!

[samberrie]

Ugh, that's my main problem when I write Paul. I make him such an uber-bitch. But I feel like it's at least 30% believable.
But thanks! I'm glad you're liking all my characterizations (excluding Paul he he) those are very important, otherwise the story would be complete crap. D:

I might try and write the next chapter in one day, as in today. I actually do that for a lot of chapters, but I just spend too much time over-editing.
Like this chapter= written in one day. Just didn't edit it too much so I could get it posted. I have some things to do today but I'll try my best! So it might be a week or two until the next chapter! *cowers*

[miss_lizzy777]

I feel like I should clarify that when I said that Paul was a little bitch, I meant that it in a good way. Bitchy Paul is fun to read, and, in my experience, even more fun to write =D

Aw, it's okay. School's probably starting for you, right? I sympathize. School is a huge timesuck that steals your attention away from what really matters - slash! No worries.

[samberrie]

I'm definitely going to be using that tickle the pickle phrase as often as I can in real life XD It's priceless. Glad you're enjoying the G/R! Woo hoo!

Oh noooo! I just assumed most of my readers could get passed the lock. I apologize!

Chapter 12 has no plot-developement, it's just glorious G/R sex, but I'll still unlock it for ya since I think it's pretty good. Just leave a comment there to let me know you've read it so I can put the lock back on! C:

[samberrie]

Yay! Glad you enjoyed this chapter, it was written in a rush.
Haha everyone seems to be rooting for Ringo! GO RINGOOO GOOOO! *raises foam finger labeled RINGO!*

I know! I took it the wrong way as well, which is why I decided to clarify that I was just using imagery, not being a pervert XD

Arigato gozaimasu for commenting! Hurray!

[larainefan]

I love George and Ringo eye-fucking one another over breakfast, and John and Paul trying to act normal, trying to act as if they didn't hear those two going at it all night, lol!

Love the phallic imagery of Ringo's key and the keyhole.

Ringo needs to stop overthinking everything, like pronto!!! I was so afraid that Ringo was going to ruin things, thinking he ought to keep things casual, which George in turn would interpret as disinterest---but George is not even noticing, he goes straight for that fucking guitar!!! So Ringo needs to stop over analyzing, and George needs to put down the guitar!!! I thought they were looking forward to spending some more time together, lol!

Great chapter! I see in your response to Hannah that the next chapter is more G/R sex, I'll be reading! :)

[samberrie]

Hee hee, I always enjoy implied-voyeurism so there's no way I wouldn't throw that in there, being the perverted little girl I am and all.I realize this chapter was uber perverted now that everyone's pointing it out. XD Psh, and I was worried about the satire. I should really be worried about how immature my humor is lmao!

Silly Ringo. Supposedly stupid and doesn't think, but he's really an over analyzer. At least in my mind. I don't think he'll ruin things though... but you never know. *evil chuckle* Plus with George's Ringo-neglection, things could go way wrong D: But I don't think they will.

Well, I was trying to work that into the chapter, G/R doin' it again (possibly fufilling Ringo's dream, if ya know what I mean *wink, wink, nudge, nudge. Say no more..) but the way things are going I think the next chapter is going to be mostly J/P C; I feel like I've ignored those two long enough, they need to work things out already!

[larainefan]

I guess it's only fair we let John and Paul have some time together in the story too! That's fine! :)

[onlywithbuttons]

He couldn’t very well tickle his pickle with the bassist in the room, now could he?

I died laughing. I really did. My funeral is next week. Lol.

I just love this story so much~ It upsets me that it's going to be a while before the next chapter... :(

[samberrie]

As did I my friend. Perhaps we could have a joint-funeral? My family is willing to split the fees, I promise.

It upsets me as well. My dad is going back to college- sort of. Some sort of air force testing crap, so anyways he'd being selfish and taking my laptop to work with him so he can watch fucking movies when he's not studying >.< He SAYS he's using it to 'study' but I know my dad well, and he's very silly like that. He'll just sit in his office with the door locked and watch Monty Python all day. XD

[onlywithbuttons]

Oh, your daddy. But, I'd want something like that if I was leaving for a long time, so I don't blame him, lol.

Luckily, my father stays right out of my buisness, so whatever I draw or write, he has no idea of. Good thing, because if he found half of what I have on the computer, he'd probably never look at me the same way again! D:

Oh sadness... At least your updating! Half the stories I'm keeping tabs on have either been forgotten, or cancelled. :(

Your very welcome! Oh, and sorry for taking so long on that picture for your story... I'm in a bit of a drawing block... I'll still try to get it done as soon as possible~! :D