Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 12)

[samberrie]

 Title: Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 12)
Author: samberrie (itsa me)
Pairing: All George/Ringo for this part
Rating: A very strong NC-17 since it gets a wee bit kinky
Warnings: Naughty language, crude humor, male-male sex, George in pain [don’t worry, he’ll be okay.]
Time Frame: Second American Tour, 1965.
Summary: In this chapter, George lets Ringo in…

Comments

[miss_lizzy777]

O.O

THAT WAS AMAZING. OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

*Cold shower*

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

*Another cold shower because first one didn't work*

Fuck. That was great. Just. Yeah. You win at life. I know you said you don't know when you can write the next part, but I need more! Get to work! *cracks whip*

[samberrie]

Hurray! I'm so releived at least one person liked it!

I've never written a full on foreplay + sex chapter before, so I wasn't sure if this wasn't completely shit. I mean I've obviously read it before, but I had to do some research on male/male sex lmao.. which was a little weird but I think it helped.
& I made sure to leave out any plot-developement so if someone doesn't like it they can just skip it XD That was me second-guessing myself I guess heh heh.

I...I can't believe it! ME? REALLY? I WIN AT LIFE? *mascara runs from tears* I wanna thank my mother for making me get those spray tans... and my father, for ignoring me. And my piano teacher, for touching my... well nevermind that, just THANKS! *blows kisses to audience*

All of that was bullshit ^

OKAY! Thanks so much! I'll try and finish the next chapter in this coming week, it's about 3/4 of the way done, I just have no idea where I wanna go with it D: But I''ll TRY and get it done my mistress... *cowers from whip*

[larainefan]

Oh My God!!! This is one of the most intense sex scenes I've read here in awhile, more intense not just because of the sex but because of the actual feelings and emotions happening while the sex was really going on! I felt like I was George about to be ravished by take-charge Ringo, I love Ringo all caring yet commanding and take-charge like that!!! I was so looking forward to reading this, but I first had to go with my estranged husband to take our daughter to lunch, so this story is dessert!!! And well-worth the wait!!! I'm going to read through this again, and quote the passages which were most striking!!! And I read the earlier John/Paul chapter too, I'll go back and leave a message there, too!

[larainefan]

I tried, but I can't get the italics to work on someone's direct journal. I had a little tequila with lunch so bear with me. I love how nervous and awkward George is. I love how George learns sweet mild Ringo is an animal once he gets going---that's actually how I picture Ringo, who strikes me as quite sexy indeed. And how Ringo rimmed him!!!! and had done his homework, finding out from Brian about the lube, etc!!! I so wish I could quote parts, but I'd probably end up quoting so much that the reader may as well go back and re-read the entire scene! This was much appreciated for a slightly-inebriated Friday afternoon! Lucky George, and dominant Ringo, one of my favorite things to read!!! I also like how Ringo told naked George he looked so beautiful just then, just exactly like that! :) My feelings exactly!!! If only we all could have been blessed to see George all lain out and ready just so!!!

[samberrie]

YES! That's my favorite part as well :D You have good taste, heh heh.

I am pleased to have aroused you. Mwahaha, that means you are mine now! I can now control your mind *creepy music* Ooooooh....

Thanks for commenting on both entries! Much appreciated!

[gotmysockson]

That was hot. REALLY hot. I'm sorry, that's the only coherent response I can muster right now. Damn I need a cold shower!

[samberrie]

Haha no problem at all! I was pretty incoherent when I finished writing it, amazed by my ability to conjure up such shameless smut. XD

Thanks for commenting! I literally just finished the next chapter like 10 minutes ago, so I'm pretty happy right now and comments make me even happier <3

[jpgr1963]

Although I'm not a G/R fan, that was some pretty darn good smut there, girl! Kudos and thank god for more smutty fics around these days!!!

Now just a request for an equally hot (or even hotter... I'm greedy) J/P smut scene, eh?

JP xo

[samberrie]

Hurray! I was a bit worried that some of the people who don't really go for G/R would be angry that I dedicated a whole chapter to the pair D:

Oh yes indeed, I promise some J/P smut shall be on it's way within the next few chapters. Just gotta plan it out right and make it extra smutty so I can relieve all this angst that's been building up for the two. I'm always annoyed when authors keep building you up and up and up and you're like "I can wait till they get it on!" and then they finally do and it falls completely flat! Like it's rushed and has 'porn-dialogue' and is just so unsatisfying.

So I definitely won't be doing that for J/P! I'll try and make it as hot as possible *crosses fingers*

[dark_princess25]

Oh, my...I think I just came