Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 21)

[samberrie]

Title: Be Happy, Baby (Chapter 21)
Author: samberrie (itsa me)
Pairing: John/Paul and George/Ringo
 Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Naughty language, crude humor, slight homophobia
Time Frame: Second American Tour, 1965.
Summary: In this chapter, look out.. it’s Brian.
Disclaimer!: I own no Beatles. None of their songs and none of their pretty faces. None of this

Comments

[windywisp]

oh my god
THE BRIAN POV. OMFG THE BRIAN POV.
I love how you portrayed him and hgshdgfsd i just can't
loving the plot development, actually! <33
: DD I can't wait for more! Hopefully Paul makes it better in the next chapter...? ; D

[samberrie]

Brian, is like, oh gawrsh <333 I love him. I'm so happy I finally found a way to fit him into the story a bit.

There should be more Eppy in the world. I demand it, God dammit!
Gimme gimme now, now, now!

Anyways, yay! Happy you enjoyed my Brian POV, I actually like that part a lot. And I loved writing it as well, came pretty easily.

Plot is alright really, I just felt like I made it so boring, especially compared to the last chapter D;: But it makes me very tingly that you liked it. Yes.

Er, sure? That's totally the plan.. heh, heh... hackcoughcough.

[windywisp]

xDD

[miss_lizzy777]

YAAAAAAYYYYYY!

I missed you and your fabulous story! This was great and not at all boring. I mean, it's not smut, but it would be dumb to compare it to smut because they're good for different reasons. John was great, and I didn't think Ringo was all that OOC. I mean, it didn't feel awkward when I read it. I love how John does the good-guy thing in the end. Why he would avoid sex with Paul is kind of beyond me, though ;-P

And Brian. I still think that Brian Epstein had possibly the hardest job in the world. Can you imagine chasing after those guys all day? Shit. I like how you write him here.

And I still want to throttle Frank. Fucking weirdo.

Anyhowdy, I loved it! Write more as soon as possible! (I know, rich coming from me.)

[samberrie]

I felt so slow writing this ahaha. And good. I don't want my readers to feel TOO awkward reading. I like a certain amount of awkwardness when necassary because I like to think it adds to the funniness, lol. Maybe that's just me...

Er, teenage logic isn't always accurate I suppose. I guess I was putting myself in John's position and thought.. would I want to fuck Paul right now? Well, being John right now, I've wanted to for so very very long, and when I finally did it was great. But then, the humiliation of getting flat-out rejected, my love that is,.... doesn't really turn me on much. It huwts :C
I dunno? Maybe my logic is bull since I can't explain it well enough tee hee. C:

Oh why thanks you. Brian's pretty fun to write. And I know, what a trooper. Brian was such a G for having faith in the boys and not giving up on them. Until he died. Boohoohoo :'( Come back to us, dear!

Don't forget to throttle Teddy.. *wink wink, nudge nudge* He might be worth it soon too. Family of weirdos, I tells ya.

[spitrainbows]

Something to distract me further from my film homework! At last!

This was a great chapter. Partly because it had BRIAN. idk, Brian's presence in fics just excites me. Probably because he is so fabulous! The Beatle-fic-verse-thingy needs more Bri Bri, yey. So I loved that bit.

Ringo, almost immediately, felt like he’d just accidentally strangled a child while attempting to give them an innocent little hug from the forlorn look on John’s face.
Oh God that totally reminded me of that bit in Frankenstein when he throws the little girl in the pond. THE MENTAL IMAGE.

The drummer was starting to feel like a dog caught eating the cat’s food.No way was Eppy going to take this lightly, it was very likely that he’d already had multiple aneurysms after reading this thing.This whole bit is perfect. Perfect simile, perfect hyperbole. You deserve an award of sorts

[samberrie]

Oh gosh, same here. Writing/reading is such a good procrastinating unit. Not for film homework, shit wouldn't mind doing that, sounds interesting, but damn Algebra 2 homework

[spitrainbows]

Film homework is actually quite fun, because the subject itself is. But yeah, maths is shit. That's the benefit of college - you choose all yer subjects! Like I was gonna do maths again for another two years. lolno

[samberrie]

Sounds very fun indeed! Maybe I should look into that when I finally make it to college. Man, college is going to be my sanctuary. All the psychology classes I need and crave in one place... oh, the wonders.

Lmfao. I laughed pretty hard, mostly because she was just like 'ker-plunk' with no resistance worth mentioning besides "No, you're hurting me! NO!" Bitch, he wasn't hurting you. He picked you up. Learn to swim and this wouldn't have even been an issue. I mean, you live next to a pond for God's sake.
Well anyways, that girl just walked right into that one blindly. Har, har, silly children from the 30's
But darn... such a potentially sweet scene turned sexy. I mean sour.
And where'd the cat go?

I really like mustaches but beards seem bothersome and scratchy, like pubes. You have a girl 'stache instead. I declare it.

All natural smut, got it. Can't force it. That would be literary rape.
Lol, we'll have to collab on a book of rhymes sometime. Woah, didn't do that rhyme on purpose... porpoise? ... or did I, puddin' pie.

[larainefan]

Poor Brian, he really had his work cut out with the lads. And being the era it was, even if he hadn't had to try to hide his sexuality from the general public, something tells me he still would have been a worrywart, ultra-fastidious, I'm sure he gave himself ulcers just imagining all the things that could go wrong, and trying to think ahead to prevent total catastrophe. I thought you did a great job summing up his character here!

And poor Ringo's (and George's) dilemma, and John seeming apparently unsympathetic, though he did finally agree to sit with Ringo when Brian came over---good for John! Ringo was like a little school kid in trouble, silently begging John with his eyes not to leave him! :)

[samberrie]

I agree completely! I wish so badly that Brian could be alive when gay marriage finally becomes legal. I KNOW it will, hopefully in my generation... bah, no need for ranting right now. It'll be pages long, I tells ya

[beatlesfan1964]

Oh god O-o Please please please update soon. I have got to know what happens! Great update! I loved it! Poor Ringo, and poor George :( God, Brians P.O.V was awesome! I hope he isn't too mean to Ringo or George. I absolutely love your story soooooo much <3 Can't wait to read more :)

[samberrie]

I will, I will! I'm excited to finish, er.. and start, the next chapter, so hopefully my excitement will turn into quickiness :3

Thanks you so vurry much! Brian's POV iz fair ze vwin, yah! I think he'll be alright with those two, just make them a little squeamish heh heh. It'll all work out in the end...

Gawrsh, thanks again. Makes me happy that you like my writing and whatnot, even with the slight sloppiness and stuff. I'll try to keep it up and not disappoint. Yes, yes, yes.