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sam_theninja24

Blow a Kiss

Feb 12, 2011 17:59

Title: Blow a Kiss
Author: sam_theninja24
Rating: PG-13/ PG
Pairings: Broken!Minkey
Genre: Romance, angst
Summary: Inspired by the song S/C/A/R/E/C/R/O/W- My Chemical Romance

( He couldn't breath... )

fanfic, minkey, shinee, rating: pg-13, rating: pg

Comments 13

fantasydesire February 12 2011, 23:31:12 UTC

HUWA~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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you made me cry. its 7.30 am here and I'm already crying..
>.<

sam_theninja24 February 13 2011, 14:30:24 UTC

Don't cry! I didn't think it was that sad!
But I guess that means it was good, since it was supposed to be sad and you cried >:D
Thanks for reading :D

fantasydesire February 13 2011, 14:56:26 UTC

nappeun yoja.. TT______________TT

but its good. ^^

vyplum February 12 2011, 23:35:37 UTC

beautiful T____T

A hand reached forward, roughly grabbing the thin wrist of another, bruising the already black and blue skin. Once flawless, now marred by the harshness of someone once loved. Struggling to break free, he cried out, but the hand of the other soon silenced his many cries.
i like how blind and chaotic this is. i was wtf-ing when i first read this, not knowing what was going on and then as i read each sentence the image became clearer in a noisy kinda way. and the way you described it was just beautiful~ love this is a beginning.

He couldn’t breath, but when he struggled to break free the hand only held him even more tightly than before. All he could do was cry silently, more air escaping his fragile body with every second. Just as the last bit of air left him, his attackers hand left his mouth and violently gripped his waist. He could feel the other’s breath against his ear, whispering promises of love to him. His brain ached with confusion, how many promises would he get before any of them were fulfilled? He tried to ( ... )

sam_theninja24 February 13 2011, 14:38:51 UTC

omg, I'm glad you liked it so much :DDD
Key & Minho both had problems in this fic lol o.o
I couldn't kill Key, I love him too much.
Then again, Minho is higher on my favs list than Key, so I dunno why I killed him...

Thanks, I saw the layout and was like 'YES!' since it's all simple and has nice colors :)

And yes, Joon shirtless is very nice :Q___

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sam_theninja24 February 13 2011, 14:39:57 UTC

Awww, I'm glad you liked it so muuuch :)
Thanks for reading it <3

melalocket February 13 2011, 08:52:28 UTC

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oh my gosshhhh its sooo sad and heart breaking!!!!
huweeeeee T___________________T

i really love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sam_theninja24 February 13 2011, 14:40:25 UTC

It is really sad isn't it? o.o
I'm glad you liked it! :DDD

chocolatos February 13 2011, 11:44:23 UTC

whiningwhiningwhiningwhiningwhiningwhining

mah minkeeeeyyyy

sam_theninja24 February 13 2011, 14:41:19 UTC

MINKEY <3
Thanks for reading :D