Comments | sam_theninja24: Get a House

sam_theninja24

Get a House

Jan 14, 2011 22:53

Title: Get a House
Author: sam_theninja24
Pairing: 2min
Genre: Romance, comedy
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Taemin and Minho decide that maybe it's time to follow Kibum's advice.

( Now, don’t start reading this thinking that Minho and I were some adorable couple full of mush and other shit like that, because we weren’t... )

fanfic, shinee, rating: pg-13, 2min

Comments 13

annyeonghase_yo January 15 2011, 05:43:57 UTC

hahahahaha. i love 2min here. It was so fluffy but... not. It's like that scratchy sweater that you hate wearing because it makes you itch, but it's the only one that keeps you warm. I don't know, never mind, ignore me, I'm just talking out of my ass now.

sam_theninja24 January 15 2011, 13:46:17 UTC

Yeah, I'm really really bad at fluff... so I guess this is my solution o_o
Sweater thing makes sense actually...

ludagitsune January 15 2011, 06:03:45 UTC

Sequel* sequel* please, I'm still waiting for those beautiful babies

sam_theninja24 January 15 2011, 13:47:29 UTC

I would, but I suck at smutty stuff (never tried it)... Maybe I'll try it >.<
And yes, I think we all are waiting for those beautiful babies :D

jinkibumiminho January 15 2011, 06:32:33 UTC

This is really different and creative! I liked the first person narrative from Taemin's point of view. Would it be Key-bitchy of me to offer some constructive criticism? You use "defiantly" in many places instead of "definitely." It distracts a little from the nice flow of the story. {hugs} I enjoyed reading it -- thanks for posting! [waits for the sexy sequel]

sam_theninja24 January 15 2011, 13:50:28 UTC

Thank you, I was just messing with this kind of idea because I'm not good at writing fluffiness.
Nah, not key-bitchy. lol. I'm sorry, I didn't even notice that I did that o_o I'm one of those people that just assumes spell check will do it all for them.
-hugs- Thanks for reading & commenting :D

choiahra January 15 2011, 10:24:11 UTC

The ending is pretty heartwarming & I cracked up whenever taemin mentioned having dozens of babies as well as kibum's insane obsession kidnapping them lmfao! XD

sam_theninja24 January 15 2011, 13:51:06 UTC

lol, seems like something he would do, right?

itzsoapie January 17 2011, 05:43:01 UTC

...D: THAT WAS SO FLUFFYYY. I love it~ But it wasn't like...sickly sweet. Just enough with the real life kind of thing thrown in. :) I like my reality...sometimes. xD

And BABIES. :D OMG.

sam_theninja24 January 18 2011, 21:35:54 UTC

Really? It was? lol I thought it totally wasn't, cuz I suck at fluff >.<

lol yeah same, most of the time life is good.

YES. BABIES. I'm thinking about doing a little smut sequel kind of thing, but idk. Never written smut before.

Thanks for reading & commenting! :D