Fragments of my Heart 4/?

Dec 25, 2010 23:36

Title: Fragments of my Heart
Author: sam_theninja24
Pairing: Onkey
Genre: Romance, drama, supernatural
Rating: R
Summary: When I was assigned to guard the demon Kim Kibum, everything changed. Now, because of him, I’m picking up the fragments of my heart.

Donghae threw the first punch, which didn’t come close to surprising me... )

rating: r, fanfic, onkey, shinee

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lovelybrii12 December 26 2010, 05:15:57 UTC
Yah! Stop stopping at parts that I don't want you to stop at... Please?

I really enjoy this fic very much. Where do these ideas come from?

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sam_theninja24 December 26 2010, 05:26:48 UTC
lol sorry I dunno why I do that... I need to stop :D
I had a dream about this actually... Except it was me & Jonghyun... And he was every other character
He's not even my fav! 0_0
Thnx for reading and commenting! <3

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tofubi December 26 2010, 05:26:12 UTC
omgeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u update!!!!!!*smother u with kisses*
tht fight scene ;_; so precious jinki all furious and hotness me!!he spat!!he spat HE SPAT!!!i hate ppl spitting but i love jinki all th same cause im bias like tht duhhh~~im so weird of all th great scene above,im flailing about jinki's spit scene =.='
oh heck,jongkyung is mental!!tht pairing *shiver*
sekyung esp scare th shit out of me *cringe*
can kibum just like come flying into the room,break her neck and kidnap jinki th next chap lolololol nah~~~kidding tht will be boring then

oh n btw,just saw on tumblr minho is dancing shirtless rn in their japan concert n im like fml ;_; okay random rant is random,just so u know imma be waiting ur next update:)))

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sam_theninja24 December 26 2010, 05:31:23 UTC
Ikr? I felt the need to make him spit. XD
He might injure her I duuuunooooo~ we'll see
Omg random but awesome (i'm random too)
Give me the link and I will love u forever!!!
Thanks for reading & commenting <3

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tofubi December 26 2010, 05:42:03 UTC
i wish i have the link dude but i dont ;______; im like close to sobbing and head-desking now!!!
why would minho dance shirtless i thought japan is like freezing now!!!T.T

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sam_theninja24 December 26 2010, 05:45:17 UTC
Wow Im a retard, didnt think about the weather and how he could get sick.
Mesmerized by the thought of Minho shirtless... >_< Damn

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rinni1905 December 26 2010, 07:08:15 UTC
Wah, congrats on your football team winning, keke, and I would love to have an Iphone 4 too, but I pay all my money for the new Itouch so I think I have to wait a little longer. And the best news I heard from you is that the new chap won't be so late. Gosh, you are torturing me with the cliff-hanger ( ... )

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sam_theninja24 December 30 2010, 16:09:22 UTC
Thanks! Lost their next game though -sobs-
Yeah, I didn't even think I was as gonna get it... I just wanted a new phone 0_0
Ikr? Innocent Onew is cool & all... but badass is SO much better >:-)
You'll understand eventually :D
Thanks for reading & commenting! <3

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melalocket December 26 2010, 11:50:37 UTC
why you stop when its getting more interesting!!!
khekekekekek...

omg kibum help jinki!!! quick!!!!

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sam_theninja24 December 30 2010, 16:10:02 UTC
Cuz' I'm just that evil >:-)
Thanks for reading & commenting! <3

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omiichan December 28 2010, 03:00:43 UTC
gahhh~~ cliff-hanger~!! really, how could you~!! ;_______;
but atleast an update~ yay~~ xDD

1st.. se kyung.. gah, what will she done to jinki~?? kibum, hurry come and save him.. save ur food~!! xDD

really like that u put kibum's idea how to torture jinki..

and last scene, what's that.. spoiler~?? >.<

gahhh~~ cant wait for next chap >W<

and congratz for the winning.. ^^~

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sam_theninja24 December 30 2010, 16:13:02 UTC
I'm evil. BWAHAHAHAHAHA! >:D
You had me cracking up at 'save your food!' :DDDD
Thnx!
I guess you could call it a spoiler... or... foreshadowing? 0_0
Imma try and update on time this time lol
Thanks, but they lost the next game D:
Thanks for reading & commenting! <3

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