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Mar 26, 2007 11:45

I walk down this street
like I have
twenty years ago.

The walks kick up dirt
that I have
now begun to know.

Sidewalk's dirty and trampled
with bits,
gravel sticks like cloves.

But I walk this place like opening scene.
Houses of strangers, strange dreams
I have yet, to know.

No one can guess
what we'll have
underneath our melting snow...

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supermorgo March 26 2007, 17:16:28 UTC
this is beautiful.

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saltofthesea March 27 2007, 05:11:56 UTC
Thank you.

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portablehailey March 26 2007, 20:21:47 UTC
when are coming to see me so i can give you a hug?

HM???

what are your summer plans besides cornerstone?

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portablehailey March 26 2007, 20:22:59 UTC
ps: did you write this? beautiful.

i love the last stanza.

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saltofthesea March 27 2007, 05:38:15 UTC
I wrote it as I walked to evening church service, yesterday. I felt so small at the beginning. I sat on a neighbour's stone fence and wrote out these thoughts. I took them out and posted them from a piece of paper in my pocket.

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saltofthesea March 27 2007, 05:25:47 UTC
Hailey, I would love to see you.

I've applied to work, treeplanting, in July and August. I hope that works out. I don't have money or ways to get to anyone, before that. I've promised I'll see Moncton people, and go to NYC with Erin and John before CS. I've promised I won't hitch-hike, so I won't, but it's tempting.

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givemethesea March 29 2007, 00:16:34 UTC
umm....freaking amazing.

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saltofthesea March 30 2007, 13:50:51 UTC
Haha you're always such a sweetheart. I love how whenever we talk to each other, it's encouraging and beautiful.

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