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[sally_spy]

 I just received a personal rejection from The Iowa Review.

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[verybadhorse]

wow. did they ask you to submit again?

[sally_spy]

yes. and they think the end of "Exposed" could be more subtle... which is kind of driving me crazy because you made the suggestion to cut the word "carcinoma" for just that purpose. i did cut it, but then i changed my mind and mailed the poem off as it was originally written.

[verybadhorse]

well, at least they didn't suggest you do something that makes no sense to you/which you have no idea how to go about. that's a quick fix. you're already there. ;)

your stuff is so good. i can't believe brian didn't like your poems. i read that and sort of scoffed.

[_swallow]

haha. that's so funny. i was on the opposite side, in "carcinoma"'s favor, but i guess i was wrong! sorry!

[intersti_seas]

AMAZING!

[norabird]

awesome. !!