Fic: He Doesn't Love Him

May 16, 2011 02:24

Title: He Doesn't Love Him
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: England/Romano, some Spain -> Romano
Characters: Romano, England, America, Canada, Germany, Veneziano, France, Spain
Warnings: Language, small amount of haircurl action, nations being stalkery, this relationship is bizarre
Notes: De-anon from the kink meme; sequel to I Don't Like You; both originally ( Read more... )

fandom: hetalia, character: england, fic, character: veneziano, character: america, character: canada, ship: england/romano, character: romano, fluff, character: spain, i am a dork, character: france, character: germany, ship type: m/m

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hollyrose_hime May 16 2011, 12:58:31 UTC
I've just read this and I Don't Like You, and I just have to say I absolutely love them! I had no idea how much I wanted England/Romano until now!

Their Tsundere speak and everyone's reactions are absolutely brilliant, and I love how they're so wrapped up in each other that they're completely oblivious to everyone else~
(...And now I want more. I'll have to see if there's anything else for the paring about, but is there any chance you'll write some more for them? =3 )

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salientia May 16 2011, 18:56:27 UTC
Thanks a lot! I'm really pleased you enjoyed the fics. :D

(I don't think I've ever seen fic of this couple, although I do have a small amount of art. As for myself, I'd definitely like to write them again, but I'm not sure whether I'll get the inspiration for it. Even if I do revisit them, it'll definitely be a while before it can happen. :( )

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prawnface35 May 16 2011, 19:55:03 UTC
Love this pairing :3 and I like how everyone is spying on them, it makes me laugh. Thanks for writing!

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salientia May 16 2011, 20:56:41 UTC
I converted myself to it through writing these. XD; Thank you for reading and for the comment. ♥

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jesage May 17 2011, 10:19:43 UTC
I love this very much. In fact, I like every fic you write I just never commented before, because I'm way to shy
But seriously, this pairing makes so much sense, I don't know why I've never seen that before.
And the spying...way too funny. :D

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salientia May 17 2011, 13:51:13 UTC
Oh, thank you very much! It's nice to meet you. I like to chat to people and I don't bite, so there's no reason to be shy around me. :)

It took the prompt on the meme for me to see it, myself. I suppose, if one tsundere is good, two is even better, right? ;)

Thanks again. I hope your shyness won't stop you from saying anything in future, if you ever want to.

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carianin May 17 2011, 21:40:03 UTC
Hey, my lovely.
While the England/Roma was cute, my favourite bits from this were the snippets of the other nations spying. You are so adept at writing them; you get it in a couple of sentances. Glorious.

How cute was Vene's persuading Germany to go to the fair? And how awesome was France? Lol that he distracts himself by imagining threesomes. (At least, that's what I hope the meat/sandwich line meant, or I'll have to get my mind out of the gutter orz) And I felt really sorry for Spain, too. :(

Vene = <3 <3 <3
France = <3 <3 <3
The whole fic = <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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salientia May 17 2011, 23:08:35 UTC
That's fair, I think I had more fun writing those bits in this one. It was a sort of exercise in portraying the characters very concisely, I suppose. Thank you, dear. :)

Lol, Germany is so easily persuaded when Vene's involved. I'm glad you liked France, too; he remains epic fun to write. (That's totally what that line meant. :DDD) Spain's situation is made worse in my mind given that I'm not convinced he'd even realise why he was so upset. :(

Thank you so much. ♥♥♥

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artemis10002000 May 18 2011, 22:13:49 UTC
These two are just gorgeous together! I love everyone's reactions, though I feel a bit sorry for Spain.

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salientia May 19 2011, 12:13:28 UTC
Thanks so much! Yeah, I pity Spain as well. :(

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