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Fic: The Terrible Potato Incident

Mar 05, 2011 01:58

Title: The Terrible Potato Incident
Rating: PG-13
Characters & Pairings: Romano/Spain; Germany/Veneziano
Warnings: Language, sexual references, making out, implications of involving pain in sex
Summary: Occupying the number one slot on Romano's list of 1,074 Reasons Why I Hate My Brother.

( “Hey, looks like Germany found out what that bit of curly hair is for.” )

fandom: hetalia, fic, character: veneziano, character: romano, character: spain, ship: romano/spain, character: germany, ship type: m/m, sex, ship: germany/veneziano

Comments 39

neocloud9 March 5 2011, 19:43:56 UTC

OH MY GOD ROMANO NEEDS TO NARRATE EVERY FANFICTION EVER FROM NOW ON

salientia March 5 2011, 21:48:50 UTC

HE WOULD IF I COULD MAKE IT HAPPEN, BELIEVE ME

neocloud9 March 5 2011, 21:52:23 UTC

Losing his cool is no longer an issue, Romano realises in the split second of stillness following this remark. He is fairly sure that he has never found his cool.

I died, man. Fuckin' DIED.

salientia March 5 2011, 22:09:37 UTC

D: *resurrects*

Seriously though, thanks a lot. XD ♥

prongsiee March 5 2011, 19:53:22 UTC

if not for the very real fear that Spain just might mistake Germany for an enormous tomato and start licking his head.

lol omg the mental image that comes to mind ffff

I loved how you wrote Romano, it was perfect! ♥

salientia March 5 2011, 21:50:12 UTC

The image becomes even better if you think about what expression Germany would be pulling, haha.

Thank you! Romano is very dear to me. ♥

lucynaribola March 5 2011, 20:09:48 UTC

sosososososo funny! *runs to see what other fics you've written*

salientia March 5 2011, 21:51:03 UTC

Glad you enjoyed! Hope my other fics are pleasing, if you do read any. :)

mystofthestars March 5 2011, 20:51:07 UTC

Oh dear. This was just perfect. XDDDD
Poor, poor Germany. And poor, poor Spain. And, eventually, poor Romano since he's the one who'll face several blood-pressure problems... ;3; Clam down, dear, relax and ...yeah. ♥

salientia March 5 2011, 21:55:20 UTC

Thank you. :3 I'd say poor Romano even during the space of the fic, since this would probably be a bit of a traumatising experience. Luckily Spain is there to help him "work off his stress". ;D

carianin March 5 2011, 21:04:54 UTC

I think I love your written Spain more and more every time. He's just so dead-pan about sexytimes!

That said, I got kinda sad seeing Romano get so angry about one of my favourite pairings. That much rage in anyone makes me hurt a little inside. :(

salientia March 5 2011, 22:02:54 UTC

Haha, thanks. I'd probably say "nonchalant" rather than "deadpan", but it's definitely a unique attitude. :)

We have to remember that Romano doesn't see it as a pairing, just as his baby brother's fraternisations with someone who Romano himself can't stand. I do agree, though, it's not a good situation, and of course I completely disagree with Romano about it. Maybe I'll try to write a fic that patches it up a bit, some time.

carianin March 5 2011, 23:06:16 UTC

Aha! Nonchalent is a much better word. Your magic writing powers have foiled me once again.

(I don't know why I'm speaking as though I'm a supervillain and you're my nemesis. ILU.)

Fair enough, but Romano's sheer level of anger is astounding. Yeesh.

salientia March 5 2011, 23:27:06 UTC

No, Mr Bond, I expect you to die. (ILU2. ♥)

I think I'd react pretty explosively in this situation, as well. But then I suppose my own levels of anger can be pretty impressive. XD;