Fic: The Candle

May 11, 2012 17:50

Title: The Candle
Rating: G
Characters & Pairings: Veneziano, Romano
Warnings: Potentially unsettling?
Summary: Veneziano is kept awake by the cold and the living.

Veneziano turns to him at last, with a smile like a jittery dancer. )

fandom: hetalia, fic, gen, character: veneziano, character: romano

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mystofthestars May 12 2012, 08:02:35 UTC
Awww, this is adorable! ♥
As always, your writing is delightful, and the two of them are so sweet. I can very well picture Veneziano wake up at night, eyes wide open and his mind running wild in this kind of thoughts... *cuddles the boy*

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salientia May 13 2012, 23:37:54 UTC
Thanks so much! This was a kind of sudden inspiration piece, so it's great to hear it worked despite the spontaneity of it all. And Vene is adorable, of course. :)

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resha04 May 12 2012, 13:45:57 UTC
This is so beautiful.
Very deep and the interactions between the brothers are really tranquil, quiet, but understanding and it is really beautiful.

And I really like Romano's words about the candle. He knows how to comfort his brother right. :)

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salientia May 13 2012, 23:39:16 UTC
Wow, thank you very much. "Beautiful" is definitely a word I'm proud to hear used, and I'm glad it came across as understanding and Romano seemed to get things basically right despite his difficulties. ♥

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