Comments | sakuratsukikage: [Fanfiction] Miles to Go (Before I Sleep), Marvel Movie-verse

sakuratsukikage

[Fanfiction] Miles to Go (Before I Sleep), Marvel Movie-verse

Sep 08, 2011 20:07

Title: Miles to Go (Before I Sleep)
Fandom: Marvel Comics Movie-verse
Characters: Iron Man/Tony Stark, Captain America/Steve Rogers, JARVIS
Pairing(s): Steve/Tony
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for mentions of war and sexual dialogue.
Summary: All the little ups and downs of a relationship, how to negotiate the space between two people. Established ( Read more... )

marvel movieverse, character: steve rogers, marvel comics, superheroes, fanfic, fic, writing, character: tony stark

Comments 14

cookinguptales September 9 2011, 03:45:04 UTC

Awww, this was really sweet in a way we don't usually get from the movieverse. I really liked it. ♥

sakuratsukikage September 10 2011, 01:57:05 UTC

Thank you very much! And yes, I . . . seem to always skew sweet in my fic, even when I'm having people angst, but I don't think that's always a bad thing, necessarily. And I suppose in a way I was trying to explore . . . similarities between their characters in the movies and the comics-verse? Which is why I set it after the movie. But now I'm just rambling. XD I'm really glad you enjoyed it! ♥

gogglehead84 September 9 2011, 04:03:39 UTC

D'awww, that was so sweet!! <3

sakuratsukikage September 10 2011, 01:58:32 UTC

Thanks so much! <3 I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

muccamukk September 9 2011, 05:45:57 UTC

I love this story. It's so sweet and warm and I just want to hug it.

I really like how Steve can't really express what he wants Tony to do, so he just sort of quietly sulks angst about it, and Tony of course is oblivious (though I really like that he wasn't too wrapped up to kiss Steve good night).

Dear Tony: you have Captain America willing and in your bed. The project can wait.

Also, that is the best mood theme.

sakuratsukikage September 10 2011, 02:06:43 UTC

Thank you, so much, for your comment! Sweet and warm was really how it turned out, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it (I enjoyed writing it; I like writing that kind of thing, so this was fairly self-indulgent, and it's great to hear that people enjoy reading that XD).

I was trying to keep them in character while keeping it fluffy, and I just can't see Steve being really expressive about that kind of thing. And I think Tony cares (about Steve, of course, and about things in general), even if he tends to majorly fail at expressing it, so . . . that was me trying to balance both of those, I think.

And yes, seriously, this is truth. Tony, why are you so clueless? If he'd just step back from whatever he's all wrapped up in and think about it, I'm sure this would occur to him.

Thanks. XD I really love my mood theme intensely.

scintillulae September 10 2011, 05:07:08 UTC

Aww, that was so cute! Well done. :3 ♥

sakuratsukikage September 10 2011, 05:14:33 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it. ♥

ladyblkrose September 10 2011, 14:33:01 UTC

Very sweet and loving story here. I love the sensitivity that Tony displays in his own way and that Steve has been with him long enough to interpret Tony's unique from of dialogue.
Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed reading this one.

sakuratsukikage September 12 2011, 12:15:17 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I really was trying to show that . . . they've adapted to each other here without being too obvious about it. I enjoy writing closeness, especially in all the little things; and I wanted to bring that out subtly but make it clear--so I think from your comment that that came through, and that makes me really happy. One of the things I enjoy about their relationship in the comic is that they know each other so well, so it was fun for me to explore that in a movieverse setting.

I love how you said Tony is sensitive in his own unique way and has his own form of dialogue, because it's so true. XD As Steve thinks, Tony is Tony. XDD