Comments | sakuratsukikage: [Fanfiction] Traditional Finnish Sleep Aid, Instructions Not Included

sakuratsukikage

[Fanfiction] Traditional Finnish Sleep Aid, Instructions Not Included

Aug 17, 2010 00:32

There had been a time, a long time ago, when Sweden’s height had made Finland feel small, as if the breadth of his shoulders and his towering height somehow made Finland smaller in comparison, just like Sweden’s gaze had frightened him, made him feel suddenly, strangely inadequate whenever he found Sweden’s eyes on him. It had taken a long time ( Read more... )

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Comments 22

ottful August 17 2010, 14:40:59 UTC

These twooooooo ;______;

You wrote them so, so perfectly, dear. You really got across both of their personalities, even with such a simple concept, but they shined so much. And all of the little details made it that much more wonderful.

vivecka August 19 2010, 02:10:48 UTC

exactly this comment. you kept Fin really IC, I liked it all alot :).
"Sweden often had trouble sleeping. Whether it came from nightmares, or insomnia, or simply him having trouble shutting off his brain that ran so much more quickly than he spoke, all the thoughts he never worked out through speaking and kept to himself."
this resonated with me alot, i have the same problems.
you should write more of these two, please, it was so romantic and sleepy and nice. i am very tired now and will be dreaming of this tonight, hah.

sakuratsukikage August 19 2010, 23:57:29 UTC

Thank you so much! I really put an effort into keeping Finland in character, because I feel like he's a tricky one sometimes, so I'm so glad to hear that you thought he was himself. And I know what you mean! I get that problem sometimes too. I'm glad it resonated with you, because that means I managed to hit on something real.

I really enjoyed writing these two, and I'm definitely planning on writing more of them in the future, and fairly soon! And I hope it did give you good dreams. ♥

sakuratsukikage August 19 2010, 23:53:31 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad I managed to make them sound like themselves, and that the details added something. And I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

guavajuce August 17 2010, 15:08:28 UTC

Thumbs up for the details.
I really enjoyed this fic <3

sakuratsukikage August 19 2010, 23:57:53 UTC

Thank you! I love details. I'm so glad you liked it!

lizzie8d August 17 2010, 17:36:06 UTC

I loved this! You managed to pinpoint their personalities and their relationship so perfectly. It was so cute~! <3

sakuratsukikage August 19 2010, 23:59:20 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really tried to get a handle on their characters and their relationship for this, so I'm really glad you thought it worked. <3 Thanks again!

jamminbison August 17 2010, 17:56:05 UTC

So sweet, I think you owe me a dentist's bill.

You write them so perfect, daww.

sakuratsukikage August 20 2010, 00:00:53 UTC

Sorry about that. XD Remember to brush your teeth after reading fluff fics!

Thanks so much. I'm so glad you liked this, and the way I wrote them.

box_of_doom August 17 2010, 22:40:34 UTC

Awww... so adorable.....

The idea that they sleep better with each other is far too adorable for words. <3

And I feel bad for using "adorable" twice, but I literally can't think of another word for it.

You have great detal... I love that you mentioned Su-san's eyelashes fluttering against skin in particular... it's a great tactile moment...

sakuratsukikage August 20 2010, 00:03:25 UTC

Thank you so much! I think the idea of sleeping better with someone is one of the best things about writing committed partners, in a way. I had so much fun with it <3. And no worries about the word use. XD Thank you again! I really love including details, and it's great to hear which ones really do work for you. Thanks again! <3