Still Hunt [Chapter Five]

[sakura_majikku]

Series Title: Still hunt
Chapter: five

It had been three days since the night the overdose had happened. The hospital had insisted they kept You in for at least another 24 hours, concerned he may continue to react to the harmful substances he had come into contact with.

Satoru stayed by his side throughout the entire stay, refusing to sleep at

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[marshmellorobot]

aah mou, i was holding my breath through the entire fight! x3 i think the lines about Satoru not being gay was curiously different, but well-played out! :O excellent again as usual~~~ i didn't expect it to be a woman though, bwahaha~ xDD as always, looking forward to the next chapter~♫

[sakura_majikku]

aha well satoru was married, and he loves his women, yet he did used to live with You throughout his music career, and both of them at one point were asked if they were gay together, so i tried to make it as real to the truth as possible :P
and women can be evil too :)
thank youu for reading!

[marshmellorobot]

aha, no i understand, all that you speak is true~ xD

it's just that... lately i've been in some weird state of mind that immediately make me think guyxguy.. like.. my friend showed me this manga the other day, and one of the panels had this guy kissing someone in a dress, and for some reason my mind immediately decided that the one in the dress was a guy! xD i had to step back and be like.. wait, who decided it was a male in the dress? ^^;; i think that's what i did here too, immediately assumed the person to be male~ lol

and yes, women can be evil indeed. >:)

[gackt_jihaku]

'OMG! Don't fight! Oh noes! OH! It's okay now!'
My thought process through the fight...Wonderful chapter! Please continue!

[sakura_majikku]

thank you for reading it :)
ill update asap

Eeek!

[yuu_binkyoku]

DX How could Satoru do that to you-san when he was still ill. This story made me very anxious and I literally held my breath till it got to the point were it said, I dressed myself in one of your shirts; it came down over my thighs, covering me perfectly. I was completely naked underneath; I couldn’t help but enjoy the thought of you wearing it after it had touched my breasts, and every other part of me….

You portrayed You and Satoru very well. Especially the part were Satoru didn't want it leaking to the press. Then at the end were Satoru asked if he could take a shower with him I suddenly got angry. I was like," How can you ask that at such a time when you specifically said that you didn't "like" men, but that you were different.

Arrrgh!!!! *throws at tantrum on the computer*
I can't wait for the next part.

Actually I checked to see if you updated this 4 times an hour. XD

Re: Eeek!

[sakura_majikku]

ahh thank you for readin this :) :)
satoru doesnt like men unfortunately, but he likes You in a sexual/romantic way, but just doesnt treat him properly and neglects him alot.
were you expecting the person to be a girl? :P

[yuu_binkyoku]

I think that since it's a yaoi fic I guess people expected it to be a guy, but you left me shocked with that one part. I think the way you told it it may have been that people would have guessed," Hey look, You-san's with Gackt....wait why is that person saying that stuff, because normally a girl wouldn't do that." It's awesome though

[aloakley]

oh my i didn't expect it to be a girl though now i think about it that makes more sense no? cos he wasn't ahem 'gay' before.
poor you-chan. loved the last line though XD
can't wait for the next part.

[sakura_majikku]

aha i think hes gay if hes totally in love with You, however he insists he doesnt like any other guys. would that make him bisexual?
ahh i dont think anyone thought the person was a girl, how come you thought it was a guy? (;

[aloakley]

well i watch this program where there's this guy who doesn't find other guys attractive except his boyfriend 'cos he wasn't gay before. but he doesn't like girls anymore either, so i don't know if guys like that are bisexual really.
on the stalker though i seriously never taught it was a girl haha maybe because its a yaoi-like story so i thougt it'd be an all guy cast. but then women are more capable of thinking up diabolical plans XD

[ilxlumixnati]

Haha, honestly, I wasn't even sure it was a /person./ You never know in fanfic-land. So I was a little surprised.

She's crazy. I love it.

Reading the parts from her point of view make shivers run down my spine. She's so crazy and wonderful and creepy.

And I'm glad You and Satoru had a little fight. I think it's a good start for them. Mmm, I can't wait for what's next, I love the tension between them.