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sakura_koi

DUAL LENS update

Feb 21, 2010 04:16

Yamada yawned and tucked in his school shirt. He ran downstairs where his sisters were all asleep on the table. Grabbing some juice from the refrigerator, he bid them bye (NO RESPONSE) and opened the front door. But what he saw at the front door made him jump, literally. A grey metallic Mercedes stood at the door step. Beside it stood Yuto in his ( Read more... )

fanfic:dual lens, yuto nakajima, yamada ryosuke

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aimix3 February 20 2010, 20:29:33 UTC

aww i see yuto already falling for her

“Yamada Ryosuke, found an alternative to live his life....” Yuto sighed. “He has indeed changed but shows us little of this new personality in him. The anger, disappointment. The sadness. That no one knows just me....and Rei. This new escape from his life to another...he calls.....Aoki Ryo

-this part is my favorite but also the saddest!
i'm soo happy you updated XDDD
you're the greatest writer i know! omg! i cant wait till the next one ^^

sakura_koi February 20 2010, 20:33:39 UTC

^^ OMG THANK YOU sooooooooooo much! Your support is just too awsome!! Live J B.F.F onegai!! haha LOL ^^ thanks for reading ne...

aimix3 February 20 2010, 20:37:14 UTC

HAHA ITS NO PROBLEM!! I OVE TO READ YOUR FICS XDDD
live j bff? whats that mean lol >.

sakura_koi February 21 2010, 04:00:50 UTC

haha mean we become B F F through LIVE J!! LOL ^^ sounds pretty neat right haha ^^

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tsubasa_quill February 20 2010, 21:49:19 UTC

You're on a roll girl!
Beautiful...as always...
Gambate!! Will wait for your update :)

sakura_koi February 21 2010, 04:01:37 UTC

WUI na...you got read ka? Now i feel soooo guilty....hahahah...^^ Arigatou ne...you rock ^^

hyuuchiha_miki February 21 2010, 02:18:32 UTC

Oh yeah~ Update! As usual, its awesome!!

Yuto tantei is cho cute!! I like that.. :) And Chinen still loves Yamada? Aww, he's such a sweet kid! And Rei-san is just too attractive ne? Yuto looks like he feel in love with her already~~ Hee hee!

sakura_koi February 21 2010, 04:02:07 UTC

HEHEHE ^^ LOL thank you for reading!! ~chuu~

liquid_drop February 21 2010, 03:01:37 UTC

Wahhhh.... I just love this chap .

Yuto moved his camera to where to voice came from. Ryosuke stood their holding his bag over his shoulder. “Aoki san...” Rei whispered. Yamada approached the Old hawker with a warning face. “You talk like that to her again, the Yakuza will be the last thing you’ll be scared of....”

---> My fav part and also ,

“Yamada Ryosuke, found an alternative to live his life....” Yuto sighed. “He has indeed changed but shows us little of this new personality in him. The anger, disappointment. The sadness. That no one knows just me....and Rei. This new escape from his life to another...he calls.....Aoki Ryo.”

---> Yuto is like a real tantei now XD

Waiting 4 next updates . Ganbatte ne ~

sakura_koi February 21 2010, 04:03:10 UTC

ARIGATOU!!! ~chuu~ I'm soo glad your enjoying it.. ONEGAI keep enjoying! HAHA LOL ^^ I'll update as soon as possible ne...HUGS**

liquid_drop February 21 2010, 04:47:06 UTC

Do itashimashite~ *hugs you back*

zeon_avalanthe February 21 2010, 05:43:16 UTC

this is AWESOME !!!

'Yuto stared...then....”OH! You thought it was mine...ieieieieieieie...nono...I was just standing near it to impress some girls just now...no no haha we are walking.....”'
XD Yuto is such a flirt !! luv this part !!

'“Yamada Ryosuke, found an alternative to live his life....” Yuto sighed. “He has indeed changed but shows us little of this new personality in him. The anger, disappointment. The sadness. That no one knows just me....and Rei. This new escape from his life to another...he calls.....Aoki Ryo.”'
uoooh. .i can't believe yuto can be so thoughtful. .

CRAVING FOR MORE !!!

sakura_koi February 21 2010, 10:10:45 UTC

YAY!! ^^ so happy you like it ne...ARIGATOU GOZAIMASHTA ~chuu**~ haha Will update soon....