The Kiss

[sakura27]

Hello everyone! Here's a tiny something I felt like writing today. I hope you enjoy it!!! As always, I look forward to your comments!

Disclaimer: Nope, Viewfinder is not mine.

Akihito enters the dark room and closes the door behind him quietly. His gaze seeks the large figure lying motionless on the bed by the window, watching every line and every

Comments

[hyper_airis]

I was melting while reading this. It was short, sweet, and very much them.

A wonderful job~ ♥

[sakura27]

thanks for reading! I am glad you liked my ficlet!!!

[sommar]

*swoons*
oh, how I want this for them!
:D
loved it!

[sakura27]

Yeah, wouldn't it be nice if they had a romantic moment like that?
I am very glad you loved it! Thanks for reading! :)

[yawns_widely]

This is beautiful - as always.

Only one tiny, tiny criticism - I think you need to break the text up into two or three paragraphs as it's a little hard to read.

I really do love your work - I love your icon too - it's adorable.

[sakura27]

Thanks a lot for reading! And for the tip! I broke it down into paragraphs, as you suggested, and it really makes a difference! :D

Glad you liked it!

[yawns_widely]

Great. I'm glad you didn't take it the wrong way.

I'll look forward to your future work.

[sakura27]

Suggestions are always welcome, especially when they are clearly well-intended! :)
Thanks for all the kind words!!!!! *hugs rozella_rising*

[civichick209]

awww.. made my heart all warm and fuzzy

[sakura27]

Great! glad to hear my ficlet had the right effect! ;)
Thanks for reading!

[darkangel105]

That was nice and sweet, Asami never wants to let go hehe =)

[sakura27]

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! :)