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[fic] Confessing is hard

Jan 25, 2012 21:18

ENTRY 04
TITLE: Confessing is hard
RATING: G
WORD COUNT: 3,705 words
NOTES: Set in real world, not necessarily in present time. :)
Sho has a lot of troubles since he doesn't know how to handle his crush on Jun... and when he finally acts, he's terribly afraid about having made the worst possible move.

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Comments 14

poilouse January 25 2012, 20:00:46 UTC

What took you so long, Sho ? Indeed ! :D
Sho is definitely the overanalysing type.
I really like Jun's sentence : "“Only if the other person is not me.”. Way to finally make Sho come to his senses !
Thank you !

yukichan_tb February 3 2012, 16:15:44 UTC

I admit... I wanted to try a weak!Sho for once :)
And this "Sho POV" contest was the best chance to do it!! (that's also why he turned out such an overanalysing type... XD )

Thanks for your comment! :D

astrangerenters January 26 2012, 02:13:23 UTC

I agree. This line:

“Only if the other person is not me.”

is perfectly placed. One of those GAAASP/OOOOHHH!! moments when you read :)

I'm glad Sho learned those lessons!

yukichan_tb February 3 2012, 16:18:52 UTC

^_______^
I think that this sentence is the one thing that people liked most :D
I "GAAASPed ad OOOOHed to myself when I wrote it actually! XD
LOL

Thanks for your comment!

r_1_ss_a January 26 2012, 03:26:13 UTC

It's unanimous! :) I also loved that line! "Only if the other person is not me."

When I got to that sentence, I may have squealed a bit, lol.

Never underestimate your bandmates, Sho! Never!

Thanks for sharing! :)

yukichan_tb February 3 2012, 16:20:58 UTC

:)
Yeah, no one should underestimate Arashi! \o/

Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked my story ♥

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yukichan_tb February 3 2012, 16:59:20 UTC

LOL
I am used to read stories where Riida is the silent man who observes and knows everything.
I kinda wanted to joke with it! XD

I'm glad you liked my story! Thanks for commenting :)

the17thline January 27 2012, 05:05:31 UTC

Jeez, grow a pair, Sakurai. But then, he did learn his lessons so. And yay Arashi intervention ftw. :D
I liked how Jun seemed confident when he was questioning Sho, only to reveal that he too, worried about what if he guessed wrong.
And “Only if the other person is not me,” wins so hard. (Looking at the comments, I echo everyone!) :D Thanks for this!

yukichan_tb February 3 2012, 17:00:46 UTC

Thanks for your comment! :)
I'm glad you liked my story!! ^^