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[fic] Labyrinth

Jan 25, 2012 21:13

ENTRY 02
TITLE: Labyrinth
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT: 2,817 words
NOTES: n/a

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Comments 6

poilouse January 25 2012, 19:49:59 UTC

Even if the trope of amnesia is considered as a cliché (in fics or whatever piece of fiction), I find it really interesting with all the alternatives it creates. I particularly like the image of the maze. The cameos of other Arashi members are lovely, and lol for the yakuza clan ! (even if it was not supposed to be funny).
Thank you !

astrangerenters January 26 2012, 02:11:55 UTC

I like Jun's devotion to Sho, staying with him throughout his recovery (and Jun as a doctor is already super hot).

r_1_ss_a January 26 2012, 02:56:17 UTC

I'm going to bother you for life I like that line!

Matsumoto-sensei is wonderful. Taking a chance on amnesiac Sho. I like how you included the other guys in some capacity all helping Sho! :)

Thanks for sharing! :)

the17thline January 27 2012, 06:15:35 UTC

Guise, you need to write more of Jun as a doctor. It's a pretty hot interesting image. :D Thanks for sharing this.

elendiliel January 30 2012, 23:37:08 UTC

LOL "I'm going to bother you for life."

Sho isn't usually written as the vulnerable one, so that was interesting to see. Yay for Jun staying with him throughout it all. :D Sad about his dad, though!