wow...what can i say? it's a great piece..and sakumoto is one of my otp :D you really did ur best to convey the whole healing process..it is so touching that Jun really care for Sho that much.. and the fact that you didn't have to write the word rape for readers to understand sho's trauma is awesome! applaud to u ^^
I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. The main topic is indeed how Jun helps Sho to recover, so I'm really glad that in your opinion I did well ^^ Oh you noticed? I tried to not use the word rape as possible, it's true ^^
Thank you very much for commenting and reading m(_ _)m
yeah..i noticed :D the best clue is when sho told jun not be near him anymore..i can sense that sho might be raped..n it's true! my heart is broken :P but it's a happy ending..so yay! ^^
I read the whole thing from the start at one go...I cried in the middle too. Thank you for sharing a lengthy and good fic! :) In my own very first fic, Sho was hurt and recovering too, so I felt really absorbed, reading your story. :) I only wish you wrote in a little more detail and length about their first time...I don't mean smut, but it was such a important milestone in their relationship and Sho's recovery and I almost read past the description...
Sorry it might have been long to read the whole thing ^^" I couldn't stop writing! I don't have the time to read right now but when I'll have I'll try yours :) For their first time I have to admit that I'm not confident about smut (as a non native english I stil have a hard time to write the sex scene as I really want) and to be honest this story is more focused on the healing process than the sex in itself. Also to be totally honest I thought about a proper sex scene for their first time but I deleted it because it didn't get well with the rest of the story ^^"
Maybe I'll write such an important scene as a OS in itself, who knows?
Anyway, thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment. m(_ _)m
no no no. I totally agree and understand your decision to not write smut. If you actually have very descriptive paragraph on it, I might have not liked it too cus it does not go along with the rest of story, just like you said :) I just meant you only kinda just 'mentioned' in passing about their first time and it was just a little....anticlimactic;;;;; since there was a lot of build up. Please don't get me wrong! I really loved your story so that is why felt like saying it.... does it make sense to you? ////^^//////
Aaaah! Sorry I didn't understand at first ^^" You're right about that fact and I kinda think myself that I should have wrote more detail about their first time but as I said, I was a bit 'lost' about that part so I just mentioned it because I felt insecure. Thank you for your advice, it's always nice when readers give their opinion ^^
Awesome !! Sakumoto involved in such an story... so good I seriously don't have words just thanks for sharing I really enjoyed reading all in one go ^^
last night, i'm totally mad when my internet fails on me when i'm about to read the last part.. thank god, i didn't close my tab last night.. so now finish reading this.
it's good. love the suspense, angst in this.. thanks for writing this :)
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it's a great piece..and sakumoto is one of my otp :D
you really did ur best to convey the whole healing process..it is so touching that Jun really care for Sho that much..
and the fact that you didn't have to write the word rape for readers to understand sho's trauma is awesome!
applaud to u ^^
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The main topic is indeed how Jun helps Sho to recover, so I'm really glad that in your opinion I did well ^^
Oh you noticed? I tried to not use the word rape as possible, it's true ^^
Thank you very much for commenting and reading m(_ _)m
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the best clue is when sho told jun not be near him anymore..i can sense that sho might be raped..n it's true!
my heart is broken :P
but it's a happy ending..so yay! ^^
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But everything ends we so yay!
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it almost make me cry...
though i'm not really into sakumoto..
but i love this fic..
thanks for sharing...
it's so rare to see our Yasashi DoS... >.<
and poor my ichiban...
at least they have happy ending ^^
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Yeah I wanted a happy ending, we see so many sad things in real life so I think at least let's have happy ends in stories.
Thank you for reading such a long story ^^
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Thank you for sharing a lengthy and good fic! :)
In my own very first fic, Sho was hurt and recovering too, so I felt really absorbed, reading your story. :)
I only wish you wrote in a little more detail and length about their first time...I don't mean smut, but it was such a important milestone in their relationship and Sho's recovery and I almost read past the description...
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I don't have the time to read right now but when I'll have I'll try yours :)
For their first time I have to admit that I'm not confident about smut (as a non native english I stil have a hard time to write the sex scene as I really want) and to be honest this story is more focused on the healing process than the sex in itself. Also to be totally honest I thought about a proper sex scene for their first time but I deleted it because it didn't get well with the rest of the story ^^"
Maybe I'll write such an important scene as a OS in itself, who knows?
Anyway, thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment. m(_ _)m
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I just meant you only kinda just 'mentioned' in passing about their first time and it was just a little....anticlimactic;;;;; since there was a lot of build up.
Please don't get me wrong! I really loved your story so that is why felt like saying it.... does it make sense to you? ////^^//////
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Thank you for your advice, it's always nice when readers give their opinion ^^
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Sakumoto involved in such an story... so good
I seriously don't have words just
thanks for sharing I really enjoyed reading all in one go ^^
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In my mind it felt right that it was Sakumoto, I don't know why but I always write them angsty ^^"
I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and commenting ^^
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it's good. love the suspense, angst in this..
thanks for writing this :)
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting despite your internet problems ♥
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