[fanfiction/multi-chapters]: Myth - Chapter 15

[saku062]

Title: Myth - Chapter 15
Beta-reader: astrangerenters 
Rating: PG-13 (I think?)
Pairing: Sakumoto (main), Masatoshi, NinoxFC 
Genre: AU, action, humor
Summary: Dreams aren't really the future sometimes. The boys finally reach Echidna's cave! This is the begining of the end.
DISCLAMER: I own nothing. And the plot comes from Rick Riordan, a damn good writer!

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Comments

[elendiliel]

I was just wondering if there would be an update on this. ^_^

SNEAKY SNEAKY. :P But I'm glad they are still together. It was nice to get Ohno's POV this time! Nino's attitude is irking me a little, even though I understand where he's coming from. But DUDE. Sho is your friend! Don't wish him DEAD! Especially when it wasn't really in his control...but anyway. I do hope Sho gets his powers back, and that Ohno's dreams don't come true. I want to know what Nino was thinking that Jun "heard" (I know it wasn't nice, but I still want to know hehe)...and I wonder if Jun *does* know about Ohno's dreams...I also wonder if Sho *will* eventually make a deal with Athena...hmm.

Lot's to think about! Looking forward to more as I try to overcome my writer's block! Also, I wish I could help you with your problem, but alas, I know only a handful of words in either language. T_T But good luck! I hope you get the job!

[saku062]

Of course there would be an upadte, we're near the end furthermore!

So many things ^^" I know that the last previous chapters and this one are a bit hard to read because the guys are having emotions we don't like...but this is mythologic AU and the guys slowly are influenced by it (or is it by someone?)

I hope you'll overcome your writer's block soon, this is really hard. Do your best!
It's okay, thank you for wanting to help me ^^ *hugs*
I'll do my best! *crosses fingers*

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

[yuui1010]

You totally had me there, I thought Sho will really get his power by dealing with Athena. But I' happy that they still together, I don't really like angst to:)

And I love you give us Ohno's POV I love to hear what he think about all of this. I really hope his dream won't come true.. They can change their fate! Nino is being a jerk here, but I understand, it must be really hard for him and everyone of them, I just hope he'll recover soon, I miss naughty Nino :(

And I'm looking forward for the next^^ ALso hope you get the job in that amusement park. It'll be so awesome! Good luck^^

[saku062]

Yaaaay! \^o^/ I'm glad I had you ^^

I told you, the guys will have their part respectively. The reason why Ohno didn't have his earlier is because he's thinking a lot and know A LOT of thing...It would have been bad if you knew Ariadne's betrayal before, right? ^^
Don't worry for Nino, he'll get over it but until now...is it the REAL Nino? *hints hints*

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^ And thanks I hope O'll get it *crosses fingers*

[deelovesryo]

Well, at last I catch up with the last chapter, and so good because I can help with your request, I'm from Spain.
I like a lot this series so far, it's pretty interesting Arashi and greek mythology and besides lately I have a weak spot for Ohba.

¿Cómo puedo ayudarte? sacaba muy buenas notas en lenguaje cuando estudiaba, ahora que trabajo no tengo mucho tiempo libre pero intentaré ayudarte en lo que pueda ^_^

[saku062]

Thank you very much, i'm glad you enjoy it ^^ Hopefully this chapters and the next ones will give you enough Ohba ^^

Muchas gracias por ayudarme!!! ♥ La verita esta que yo ha perdido mi accento y tengo difficultas para escribir y formular frases en español. También yo confudo italiano y español mucho ^^"

*hugs*

[deelovesryo]

Oh! es cierto que confundes italiano y español, verita es italiano, lol. Tu frase debería ser más o menos:
La verdad es que yo he perdido mi acento y tengo dificultad en escribir y formular frases en español. También confundo mucho italiano y español.
¡Ah! recuerda que en español generalmente se omite el sujeto, repetir todo el rato yo, yo, suena muy raro.

Feel free to PM me if you want to ask something or just talk in spanish.

[elyon14340]

I was always wondering why you never wrote on Ohno's pov. We've seen the others' povs before, but you never really wrote in his. Glad you used it this time, it helps the idea that Ohno is indeed an observer who cares a lot for his friends. :3

You did mention before that killing Ariadne was necessary, I do hope it's going to build up a deeper bond between Sho and Nino sooner or later. I don't like Nino's attitude here. :|

And good luck on that interview! I hope you do get it, it's something anyone would want. :3

[saku062]

Now you know why Ohno's part didn't come earlier. It would have ruined everything if you knew beforehand Ariadne's plan, right? ^^

Like you I don't like Nino's attitude and it was hard for me to write it but...is it really Nino? (I'm ruining the whole plot here XD)

Thanks I want September to come faster ^^"

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

[aoiclover]

so that's Ohno POV?
You scared me >< i though Sho really accept the offer.
Why Nino still want Sho dead? It isn't fully his fault that Ariadne is dead... His behavior really strange to me..

What's waiting them in the hole? I hope they will be fine.. ><

Thank you for the update

[saku062]

Yes this is Ohno's POV actually ^^ Sakumoto are still together don't worry ♥
About Nino and his behaviour...I know it's hard to read (believe me it was hard for me to write it) but you'll understand everything in the end. And just because I don't like hurting my readers, here is a little hint: Maybe Nino's thoughts aren't really his? ^_~

Thanks for reading and commenting ^^