Field of Stars, Day 1

[sakon76]

I've read through the seventy pages I had, and edited it down to sixty-nine. I have decided that I hate the first scene, possibly the entire first chapter. I can tell that it's not good because I actually hit a point where my brain said, "Finally! The good stuff!" But I don't know how to fix it just yet. The funeral is important, and

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[tainry]

My cat Tang will join yours in carrier to vet misery tomorrow morning. ^^; He's been demanding more food but losing weight. Not sure what's up with that. o.o