Comments | sakichirox: little Fic

sakichirox

little Fic

May 16, 2006 22:20

Title: Who Knew?
Characters: Harry/Draco
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: character death, slash
Word Count: 340-ish
Comments: Feeling a bit apathetic at the moment. And I'm feeling a bit angry, so I wrote this to help me vent. It's not beta'd or anything so yeah...
Summary: Who knew it would have ended up like this. Draco POV

EDIT: I took Tresa's ( Read more... )

fic, harry potter

Comments 2

tresa_cho May 17 2006, 20:39:04 UTC

OMG Saki that was incredible! You nearly had me crying, you wench! Uh... no grammar that I could see. I think it was good that it was so short, but maybe take out the part where Draco watches Harry take himself out. It's sort of implied when Draco says 'i have you'. Great job, wow.

sakichirox May 22 2006, 14:43:19 UTC

*petpet* I changed it a bit to your suggestion, hopefully that's better? ^^ *is a wench* all the wenches in the house go huff huff huff! *does teh booteh dance* Thank you for reading an dcommenting! I didn't even know until yesterday because MSN is being a total bitch to me lately! PMS!MSN *huggletackleglompsnog* thank youu!