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saki101

MFU Fanfic: Third (continued)

May 23, 2010 15:57

This is a continuation of an Easter Egg entitled Third that I posted at MFU Writers Survival School early in April. For the first part of the story click here. Some readers were kind enough to express a wish for more of the story, so here it is.

Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own MUNCLE and no money is being made.

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Comments 26

spikesgirl58 May 23 2010, 17:00:25 UTC

Okay, I'm going to be the first to say this was f*&%$#g wonderful! Talk about dragging your reader along for the ride! I am not all that familiar or comfortable with music, but you were able to accomplish both being informative to the novice, but not condescending with the information.

Incroyable, that's all I can add... well, that and Illya had a very good night...

saki101 May 23 2010, 17:12:09 UTC

Oh, thank you, thank you! It is thrilling to have such prompt and positive feedback.

Meanwhile, I am reading, reading and will be replying soon.

spikesgirl58 May 23 2010, 19:27:04 UTC

And deserving of every word of it... I just finished re-reading this and think I liked it even better the second time around.

Of course, curious cousins want to know about the ladies...

kanders07 May 23 2010, 20:24:50 UTC

Wow, absolutely incredible. Your description of the concert was wonderful. Brava!!! More please? I'm dying to know who the two ladies are in relation to Illya. And poor Napoleon.

saki101 May 26 2010, 18:39:52 UTC

Thank you very much for reading and encouraging! I am working on more.

snailbones May 23 2010, 20:28:29 UTC

If it's possible to be addicted to writing, then I'm addicted to yours *g*

This is so gorgeous and haunting. I love the way you can describe the smallest detail, I love the mystery, and the atmosphere and the feeling of the approaching storm... ack, you've got me hooked. *hg*

saki101 May 26 2010, 18:55:38 UTC

The muse is heartened and has started to hop around and chirp and fluff up his feathers after hearing such comments. I hope to have something for your addiction (what a sweet thing to say!) in a couple weeks or so.

tafizgurl May 23 2010, 22:20:12 UTC

Wow. Please, can we have more?

saki101 May 26 2010, 18:56:37 UTC

Thank you!!

msscorpioct May 23 2010, 22:37:42 UTC

Oh, yes- Brava!

So worth the wait- and ever so addicting! And now that just leaves- MORE, WE NEED MORE!!!

Brava!

((HUGS)),

Karin

saki101 May 26 2010, 18:58:38 UTC

Many thanks! I have a long train journey coming up, so with notebook and pencil in hand, there may be more fairly soon.