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sakaim

Ambivalent Lucidity Rewrite

Oct 03, 2006 08:21

Title: Ambivalent Lucidity
Rating: Currently R
Pairings: Harry/Draco
Summary: When Draco Malfoy's mental health mysteriously declines, he is placed under the care of the only person he responds to: Harry Potter.
Warnings: (Future) Violence, rape, character death, mental illnesses, slash, Pre-HBP

Beta-read by cluelesschase.

( Chapter Nine )

harry/draco, ambivalent lucidity, pre-half-blood prince, nc-17

Comments 6

anonymous October 3 2006, 19:45:29 UTC

wow, i dont normally read harry/draco stuff, but i read all of your last remus/sirius fic and thought id give this one a go.
I love it!

aidens_fire October 3 2006, 20:56:49 UTC

Still so cute. I have a little bubble in my chest now, this story makes me happy!

lire_casander October 4 2006, 11:33:29 UTC

Harry is sooooooooooooooooo nice, and Draco really needs to talk to someone about his nightmares. I was thinking about Bellatrix being the captor because that person said something about a "baby" which is what in Spanish Bellatrix says a lot. But then, when you wrote Draco was raped... I started thinking about Voldemort. Or maybe Lucius, who wasn't at all dead. Now you have me thinking about who it is!!!

And the kisses... Firts the soothing kisses, the ones Harry gives Draco in his forehead and in his hair to make him feel better. They're wonderful. And the two kisses, they made my day. You write so beautifully, dear!

anonymous October 6 2006, 13:23:44 UTC

WHAM that was a bad, bad dream Draco had there... but it helped get the relationship up a notch, so... ok, but your schemes get more interesting as the days go by, I hope for more revelations!
Cat

x_fairyland21_x June 12 2007, 11:51:52 UTC

I LOVE YOU! Haha. Ok, i'm going to sound like a complete nut but gosh!! AHjsBUJDBadbUO Haha. I am so worked up over this story. I have fallen head over heels in love with it. Haha. The writing is fantastic and the way you describe situations, feelings and so forth is amazing. I love how you're slowly making the relationship grow. I know with some fanfictions they basically push the whole relationship/love thing into our faces in the first chapter and it doesn't happen like that. All i have to say is.. WOOOOOW!! You've done a fantastic job. I can't wait to go onto the next chapter. But i have no time now. =( Haha. I've read up to here this afternoon. Anyway.. i'll be back. Hehe.
xx