A P-Town Miracle - Chapter #23

Jul 29, 2015 18:16

Title: A P-Town Miracle
Author: sajaal
Disclaimers: Not mine wish they were
Rating: G - R; (language and “sexy-times”)

A/N: Luke opens a bookstore in Provincetown.  Reid is a renowned neurosurgeon in Boston who finds himself the guardian of his niece. The two meet due to a Holly’s inability to speak.

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dr. reid oliver, !author|artist: sajaal, livejournal, luke snyder, fanfiction, lure

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msmurph123 July 30 2015, 18:49:35 UTC
Awe, love them.

"Reid cleaned up Violet’s paws with the towel by the door and then hung his own coat up. Luke watched realizing that Reid knew where everything was in his home, he wasn’t a just a guest anymore he belonged here with Luke and it made Luke gasp. "

Love how Luke is so giddy at the sight of Reid making himself at home in Luke's home. Great night for them. ❤❤❤. Thank you for this story.

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Re: sajaal August 1 2015, 20:07:56 UTC
You know how that can happen someone comes into your life and you go along for awhile dating and hanging out and then suddenly BAM!! it hits you this person belongs in my life and that's one of those AH-HAH...moments and that's exactly what Luke was feeling...I remember panicking when it hit me and now 20 odd years later we're still together:-))

I needed to show Luke's aggressive side sexually which was always so downplayed with Noah and sex and even affection (PDA's) always appeared to be on Noah's terms not Luke's and I didn't want Luke to have that again...and we know that Reid is not like Noah...bring on the PDA's and an aggressive take charge Luke...putting that balance into the relationship.

Thanks as always my dear for reading and commenting...all the way through!!!!

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vision_m July 30 2015, 22:04:51 UTC

I'm still impressed by these 2 and just how far they have come. going to miss this when it ends but like u said before u will continue this verse.

great chapter

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sajaal August 1 2015, 20:03:16 UTC
It's so different writing them like this, Reid especially with his responsibility of Holly which brings out that caring side we always know is there, he just likes to hide it. Having Luke on his own without the constant interference of well meaning family and friends also changes the dynamics a bit. But in the end we know that they belong together and this just shows another side to how their relationship begins...and yes continues:-))

Thanks as always you for reading and commenting all the way through....it is very much appreciated;-))

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amyafa July 31 2015, 09:10:55 UTC
Sigh.

They are so good for each other.

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sajaal August 1 2015, 20:09:03 UTC
I take that as a very happy "SIGH"...you are so very welcome and yes I like to make you guys sigh:-))

As always sweetie thanks so very much for reading and commenting throughout my story!!!

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parishs August 3 2015, 04:15:27 UTC
ah lovely chapter! I am team top-Luke!

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sajaal August 5 2015, 02:02:34 UTC
Thank you, I love being able to write Luke as the agressor and top, we know he would be very, very good at it and now Reid will be able to benefit from Luke's passionate side:-))

As you know thanks so much as always for reading and commenting!!!

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hilja83 August 3 2015, 11:45:31 UTC
Really hot, but not just hot you can feel in every word that it's not just sex between them, they are perfect.

loved it!

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sajaal August 5 2015, 02:04:49 UTC
Thank you and I understand exactly what you mean...hot yes but with so much more passion and intimacy with these two. It makes for easy writing with these two knowing how much they feel for one another and realizing that it's not just about sex and getting off but rather giving as much pleasure to one anther that they can:-))

As you know sweetie thanks so very much as always for reading and commenitng!!!!

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