Doc Chicago: Chapter #13

Dec 22, 2013 18:10

Title: Doc Chicago
Author: sajaal
Rating: G to R (just in case)
Characters: Dr. Reid Oliver, Luke Snyder, Holden Snyder, Aaron Snyder, Dr. Bob Hughes, Katie Snyder and a myriad of atwt and original characters
Disclaimer: Not mine, and I really mean no harm and all mistakes are mine.

A/N:  This is partly AU and partly not.  I have to thank ( Read more... )

dr. reid oliver, !author|artist: sajaal, luke snyder, fanfiction, lure

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sajaal December 24 2013, 00:55:06 UTC
There are so many times when Reid wants Luke and then steps back and is such an ass and yeah that's how he was in this chapter...he can't accept that he's attracted to Luke but he is and that's how it always is for them after seeing each other just a few times the connection kicks in. Reid will have his say about Luke's health, but like I said we need fireworks first...not spoilers just a hint for you:-))

Aaron, oh how I wished he was part of the original "fiasco" but now I can put him in my own story and rectify the writer's of at wt's mistake (one of many)...Reid has some thinking to do and Luke needs to show him who he really is and the opportunity will come soon.

Well my dear, thanks ever so much and yeah I'm happy that my "mere words" are making your blood boil (lol!!!) that's a wonderful compliment for me...

Thanks sweetie and have a wonderful holiday with your family!!!

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kccalgal December 24 2013, 06:16:46 UTC
From where I sit Reid just did Luke the biggest favor in the world by saying no. Now Noah has no reason to get in contact with Luke again. The tornado can harmlessly break up in the sky.

If Reid agreed to see Noah then the tornado would head straight for Oakdale demolishing what is left of Luke's fragile ego. Reid didn't say anything to LUke that Luke didn't already think himself and I would never expect Reid to sugarcoat it.

I am glad to see Aaron step up and paint Reid a clearer picture of Luke's situation. I look forward to seeing if Reid goes back to sit down with Luke for another kind of chat. Never seeing the movie has kept me completely in the dark.

Off to write more on my story.

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sajaal December 25 2013, 03:38:30 UTC
YES!!! You get it thank you my dear, that's exactly what I was trying to do, put that last nail in the proverbial Noah coffin to keep him out of Luke's life for good....but and yes there is a but, but you'll have to wait. Oh and so right again Luke knew he wasn't going to get Reid to agree but as usual he had to try that's just the way he is...."noble" is a good word I think.

Aaron...such a stand-up guy and a protective big brother to tell Reid what the real story is...

Thanks sweetie, enjoy your day tomorrow, my kids are all snug in there bed's and now we must go to bed so Santa can come:-)))

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luregroupie December 24 2013, 23:44:58 UTC
Thanks for the extra chapter. Have a great holiday

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sajaal December 25 2013, 03:39:36 UTC
You too have a great holiday and you'll see my first story on the 26th, to beta...thanks so very much and enjoy tomorrow....

Thanks for reading and commenting too....I love to hear from all of you:-))

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zzzfreckles December 25 2013, 01:57:37 UTC
OMG, I cannot wait until Reid has the chance to put the DOUCHE in his place and send him on his way and I’m looking forward to seeing how you make that happen. Merry Christmas and looking forward to your Yule Story!

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sajaal December 25 2013, 03:41:52 UTC
Reid will have a chance don't worry and things will have changed a lot by the time he meets Noah and his "relationship" with Luke will be at a different point;-)) Have a great Christmas and holiday and remember it's not just one but three stories.

Thanks again my dear as always for reading and commenting and you know!!!

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sleeper6 December 26 2013, 02:23:11 UTC
Oh, Luke, how I love him so! He keeps trying to make things right with Noah even if he didn't do anything wrong in the first place. The accident wasn't Luke's fault! I just wish he believed that himself.

Not surprised that Reid turned him down though I wonder if he'll reconsider after that chat with Aaron.

Another good one!

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sajaal December 27 2013, 01:46:48 UTC
It always broke my heart a little to see Luke willing to put everything out there and then get stomped...he kept getting up but boy did it do some "emotional damage" sometimes you just want to go in there and hug him and say...it's going to be okay...poor lamb in the words of lemon drop:-))

Reid will never admit that he was wrong but, he may see another side of Luke the one that Aaron is telling him is the real Luke and then he may see the way and follow the light that is Luke Snyder;-)

Thanks as always you, now I must type and get going to Yule Lure...I'm a bit behind but my stories will get out there...promise!!!

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