Comments | saiyuki_time: here it goes...

amikko in saiyuki_time

here it goes...

Mar 20, 2008 12:43

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pair:gojyo/hakkai, author:amikko, challenge:first times

Comments 23

7veilsphaedra March 20 2008, 07:06:54 UTC

*waves hello*

Lovely what you managed to say so succinctly.

That was fun.

amikko March 22 2008, 01:52:40 UTC

my first comment! *giggles happily*

thank you so much.

a_mael March 20 2008, 07:47:23 UTC

Hi there! This is your first fanfic? You certainly show a lot of promise ^__^

This little piece really does, as 7veilsphaedra mentioned, say a lot very succinctly; it's very strong. You have a very nice flow and the different sentence lengths give a nice punch.

I look forward to seeing more from you.

amikko March 22 2008, 01:54:26 UTC

thank you! thank you for the encouragement.
i'm looking forward to write more too. (^_^)

a_mael March 22 2008, 10:29:13 UTC

Good! There is no such thing as too many good writers, after all!

louiselux March 20 2008, 09:53:12 UTC

No, that was exactly what I meant! I think you interpreted the challenge very well and I really liked the moment when he opens his cupboard and the realisation hits him that his life has changed so much.

Also, just a note - please put this fic behind an lj cut, as per the posting instructions, thanks.

amikko March 22 2008, 01:59:53 UTC

Eeeps! edited it already. *sheepish grin*

No, that was exactly what I meant!

whew..i was so nervous. thanks for the nice words. (^_^)

purpleicicles March 20 2008, 14:03:50 UTC

Brilliant first drabble! You've certainly got the authors touch - the syntax flowed really well, and the emotional context is underpinned by the length, so it doesn't get all waffly. Very tight and professional! A joy to read, so write more often, okay? ^____^

amikko March 22 2008, 02:07:32 UTC

such words coming from you, one of my favorite saiyuki writers, made me speechless with joy. thank you.

purpleicicles April 1 2008, 19:52:32 UTC

*glerk* O-one of your faves? *blushes crazily* Thank you so much! That's honestly the sweetest thing anyone's ever said to me!! *loves*

7veilsphaedra March 20 2008, 14:43:10 UTC

Since you're new to LJ, here's how to do a cut:

Use angle brackets instead of squared.

[lj-cut text="Catchy phrase goes here."] Drabble [/lj-cut]

If you want to link to your journal:

[a href="URL goes here"]Catchy phrase goes here[/a].

amikko March 22 2008, 02:08:25 UTC

tadaaa!!! hehehe... i've edited it following your advice. thanks again.