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Regalia (Challenge 20)

Aug 03, 2008 13:08

title: Regalia
author: kisarazumama
pairing: gen
prompt: clothes
time: 46 minutes flat, plus coffee break
summary: He never looks even the least bit ridiculous.

( Regalia )

char:sanzo-ikkou, challenge:clothes, author:kisarazumama

Comments 14

sharpeslass August 3 2008, 17:22:04 UTC

Excellent... I adore the last line. Love the whole thing. This is a perfect piece of writing.

kisarazumama August 3 2008, 17:27:26 UTC

Gee, thank you! It was fun. =)

(I've always tended to ramble, so I've been working really hard on editing and compression. These challenges are a great way to do that.)

missingkitsune August 3 2008, 17:52:51 UTC

what a fantastic story. this was something really enjoyable to break the boredom of the day.
thank you,

jedishampoo August 3 2008, 18:24:37 UTC

Oh, what a short but truthful read. A lovely portrait of Sanzo, and of Gojyo and Goku also, in a way. Very nicely done.

clytemnaestra August 3 2008, 19:00:55 UTC

Ah, that was wonderful! I love how you have both Sanzo AND Gojyo pegged here.

kisarazumama August 3 2008, 20:57:56 UTC

*happy wriggle* Sankyouu!

eyesofshinigami August 3 2008, 23:59:09 UTC

I loved this. Your Gojyo voice was fantastic, and I really loved the way you pegged Sanzo like that. It's truly awesome when he gets going, isn't it? ^__~

I also liked the comparison to Goku. Very apt, I think.

Good job!

kisarazumama August 4 2008, 06:25:55 UTC

It truly is, and I think Gojyo would be honestly awestruck by it, because it's no mere temporal authority but has that breath of divine will in it. Like them all, he's something parahuman and extra-special, which is honestly why I think they cut him such miles of slack.===I'm most humbly glad you like it. =)