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Antiphony (Challenge #15: Hearing - Haiku; Sanzo, Gojyo; PG)

Jul 01, 2008 07:24

Title: Antiphony
Author: opalmatrix
Warnings: Gojyo's mouth
Pairing(s): n/a
Spoilers: Nothing much. The Gojyo verse was directly inspired by the end of the scene at the site of the Centipede King's fortress in "Be There."
Notes: Written for saiyuki_time prompt #15 Sense of Hearing. Time allowed: any. Form required: Haiku. Time taken: 12 ( Read more... )

challenge:hearing, char:gojyo, author:opalmatrix, char:sanzo, rating:pg

Comments 5

purpleicicles July 1 2008, 14:19:47 UTC

Mmmm, nice focus on voices - Gojyo's one especially made me shiver with delight! ^___^

opalmatrix July 9 2008, 01:20:32 UTC

Thanks - I'm glad it worked! I love "Be There," and the way that horrible evening resolves, with Gojyo practically ordering Sanzo to "chant a sutra or something, man" - and then getting completely blown away by the result - is one of the things that first made me realize what a great series this is.

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opalmatrix July 9 2008, 01:22:44 UTC

Awww, thanks!! The Sanzo one came fairly easily, but I wrestled with the Gojyo one, even thought the scene was vivid in my memory. Like pruning my brain into a bansai tree ... .

louiselux July 3 2008, 15:06:18 UTC

Oooh, I really love how they answer each other, and so full of character too!

opalmatrix July 9 2008, 01:25:45 UTC

> wipes forehead with relief <

Thanks! I got worried when I started reading everyone else's, because mine aren't very poetic. But the Sanzo one just sort of came on its own, and then I remembered the "can't you chant a sutra or something" bit in "Be There," and the Gojyo became the answer.