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Skin-Hunger (Challenge #13: Touch; Hakkai; PG-13)

Jun 12, 2008 22:59

Title: Skin-Hunger
Author: opalmatrix
Warnings: not-quite 585, oblique mention of bodily functions
Pairing(s): [pre-Hakkai/Gojyo]
Spoilers: A bit of Hakkai and Gojyo's history together (primarily "Be There," but also their Burial Arc)
Notes: Written for saiyuki_time prompt #13: Sense of Touch. Time allowed: 10 minutes. Time taken: 14 minutes ( Read more... )

challenge:touch, author:opalmatrix, char:hakkai, rating:pg-13

Comments 16

purpleicicles June 13 2008, 10:06:49 UTC

Well go over there and get it then, Hakkai!!! Really like the feelings you conjured up in this fic, and the last line in particular just made me go "Awwwwww, Hakkai!".

(Challenge #13: Touch) opalmatrix June 30 2008, 11:38:36 UTC

He's such a mess, isn't he? He hasn't had any good role models for expressing his affection - Kanan was sort of a part of himself, so the situation was very different. I'm glad you liked it (and I owe you a bunch of responses, but it's going to take me a bit to catch up).

Re: (Challenge #13: Touch) purpleicicles July 3 2008, 10:40:44 UTC

Haaa, that's okay - I've still got stuff from last year I've been meaning to comment on!

theskywasblue June 13 2008, 16:06:52 UTC

Aww...this is very sweet, if a little sad. Poor Hakkai, he's so good at denying himself.

opalmatrix June 30 2008, 11:40:04 UTC

Eventually, I think, Gojyo's warmth will penetrate enough that he'll realize he can speak up ... I'm glad you liked it!

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opalmatrix June 30 2008, 11:41:35 UTC

Hakkai's way of dealing with trauma is to attempt to make order out of chaos ... vegetables are important, you know!

XD

Awww, thanks!