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11 - Scents and Sensibility, Gonou, R

Jun 02, 2008 01:50

Title: Scents and Sensibility
Author: andmydog
Warnings: Descriptions of carnage; ickiness
Pairing(s): None
Notes: #11 - Smell, 20 minutes exactly

( Among those who undertake to study such things, it is held that dreams are not mere reflections of the waking world. )

char:gonou, author:andmydog, rating:r

Comments 17

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andmydog June 2 2008, 22:45:53 UTC

Eep. Thank you! I was totally worried this was less nightmare and more, well, bad.

7veilsphaedra June 2 2008, 14:13:23 UTC

Disturbing, wrenching, wonderful writing. The fragmented sentences and single words are amazing, gritty but polished. This was spontaneous writing? Wow! The last paragraph is like a kick in the gut.

andmydog June 2 2008, 22:50:47 UTC

Thank you! The last paragraph was so hard, and I wasn't sure if the way it just trailed off into even more angst and gloom was anything but ridiculous. I'm so glad you liked it!

louiselux June 2 2008, 14:23:09 UTC

*whimpers*

That's amazing.

andmydog June 2 2008, 22:51:04 UTC

Thank you!

rhosyn_du June 2 2008, 18:42:11 UTC

Stunning and stomach turning both at the same time. This is beautiful.

andmydog June 2 2008, 22:52:44 UTC

My late-night stream of consciousness, let me show you it!

rhosyn_du June 2 2008, 23:36:25 UTC

Oh, baby, you know I loves me some late-night stream of consciousness. XD

cornerofmadness June 2 2008, 19:34:49 UTC

very nice images in this. I really liked it (kicks you for the title. I had to.)

andmydog June 2 2008, 22:53:16 UTC

I finally found a use for Jane Austin! XD

cornerofmadness June 3 2008, 01:25:02 UTC

snort