Beauty, Challenge 10

[lady_ganesh]

Title: Beauty
Author: lady_ganesh
Characters: Kenren, Tenpou
Time: About forty minutes writing, ten or so editing. Spoiler free!

Comments

[lady_ganesh]

Thank you so much!

[eyesofshinigami]

Very nicely done! I really enjoyed your Tenpou and Kenren voices here. And I loved how disappointed Tenpou was when Kenren didn't hit on him straight away. :P

The ending was hot, even if it was only implied. ♥

Thanks for sharing!

[lady_ganesh]

He's Kenren! Tenpou feels like lack of flirting was shirking his duty in some essential way.

Thanks so much for commenting!

[hieronymousmosh]

♥ Wonderful! I love their banter and the mention of Tenpou's hopelessness in housekeeping (officekeeping?) *g*

[lady_ganesh]

He really is helpless. Thanks!

[macavitykitsune]

I always knew there was a reason Tenpou kept making Kenren clean for him....^_~

And the last two lines were perfect.

[lady_ganesh]

Wouldn't you?

Thanks so much!

[ginnyvos]

Loved it... It had this soft, quiet vibe to it that was set by the introduction and from there is slowly got more... real, I suppose. And the end was amazing. Very well written! ^^

[lady_ganesh]

Thank you!